Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what type of
neighbor is the best to have?
- Someone who is quiet
- Someone who we are similar to
- Someone who is supportive
Use specific details and examples in your answer
With the growth of cities in the last century, the neighbors have an essential and useful roll in the life of other people that live near them. I firmly believe that one of the best properties for an individual that lives near people is having a supportive feature. In the following paragraphs, I will elucidate my opinion.
Firstly, oftentimes, people need help from other ones, and in these situations, neighbors can have a critical supportive role for individuals. In the new life-style that people usually far away from their family and supportive society, which they always account for the help of them in crucial conditions in their life, people who live near individuals can do this duty for them. For example, when I was going to university, I lived in a big city and did not any access to my family and my sister. At that time, I had a neighbor that always care of me when I was sick or had other problems. This supportive behavior of my neighbor was the reason I lived in that apartment all those years, even though I did not really love that home. As a result, people who live in neighborhoods can play an important role in the life of individuals, and having supportive neighbors is a good option for having a comfortable life.
Secondly, people can make reliable friendships with their supportive neighbors, and it can increase the level of contentment and joy from their life. To be more specific, one of the determining factors for having a good friendship is the supportive feature of friends. If we can find an individual who can be reliable for us in stressful situations, we will make a strong relationship with him or her. For instance, I remember when I was going to high school, for a long time, I could not go to school for some family problems. But one girl who lived in our apartment and just was my classmate, every day came our home and explained to me all courses. After a time, a profound friendship form between us, and to this day, we are close friends.
In conclusion, being supportive is a preferred feature for a neighbor. In the new life-style which people usually do not live close to their family, and thus they need help and support of other near people like their neighbors. Additionally, supportive close people are a good option for having a deep friendship.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6683046683 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76399344473 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457002457002 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4243310793 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.555555556 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6111111111 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207080882433 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769844637802 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483405650711 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146205599109 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303387698105 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.