NO books should ever be banned
I strongly believe that books should not be banned. nowadays when a writer writes a book. He has a clear idea about it, so every book provides necessary information and experience. we can learn diverse things from different books, science books tell us about the method of science and how we can use it in our daily life, and historical books tell us about the history of civilization. so books are very necessary for society and all books should be used.
First, by reading books we can boost our information. most books are written according to the experience and needs of society. books can tell different ideas about a subject. for example, when I was at my elementary school. my family bought a roman book by the name of 'Kite runner. that book was written from a real story about my country. after reading that book I noticed that I have a lot of information about my people, country, customs, and more, even though I was a ten years old boy, I learned a lot from that book. Nonetheless, every book provides a necessary which is important for our life.
Furthermore, people claim that books sometimes convey the biases of the author. according to them, books do not enlighten the reader with the truth. The fundamental purpose of a boom is to transfer the thought and the immigration of the author to the reader. it is nothing to do with the transmission of truth, I think that people who believe that the author should be candor are the most foolish for entertainment purposes and it would not affect my choices until there is serious evidence mentioned by the experiemnt preferred by the writer. for instance, I read the book named atomic habits. it helped me to make an illusion in my mind that I have to improve incrementally every day. moreover, the view belonged to the author, but this experiences my life and therefore, I started believing in his ideas and finally implemented a schedule according to the boom.
As a result, I believe that banning a book can impact negatively and should not be banned, because the book is required to say the truth and every book is written from an experience that the writer does before wrote of the book.
NO books should ever be banned
I strongly believe that books should not be banned. nowadays when a writer writes a book. He has a clear idea about it, so every book provides necessary information and experience. we can learn diverse things from different books, science books tell us about the method of science and how we can use it in our daily life, and historical books tell us about the history of civilization. so books are very necessary for society and all books should be used.
First, by reading books we can boost our information. most books are written according to the experience and needs of society. books can tell different ideas about a subject. for example, when I was at my elementary school. my family bought a roman book by the name of 'Kite runner. that book was written from a real story about my country. after reading that book I noticed that I have a lot of information about my people, country, customs, and more, even though I was a ten years old boy, I learned a lot from that book. Nonetheless, every book provides a necessary which is important for our life.
Furthermore, people claim that books sometimes convey the biases of the author. according to them, books do not enlighten the reader with the truth. The fundamental purpose of a boom is to transfer the thought and the immigration of the author to the reader. it is nothing to do with the transmission of truth, I think that people who believe that the author should be candor are the most foolish for entertainment purposes and it would not affect my choices until there is serious evidence mentioned by the experiemnt preferred by the writer. for instance, I read the book named atomic habits. it helped me to make an illusion in my mind that I have to improve incrementally every day. moreover, the view belonged to the author, but this experiences my life and therefore, I started believing in his ideas and finally implemented a schedule according to the boom.
As a result, I believe that banning a book can impact negatively and should not be banned, because the book is required to say the truth and every book is written from an experience that the writer does before wrote of the book.
Comments
Some people say that…
Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not
need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may
improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Use specific reasons and
examples to support your answer
Marketing strategies of the industry include advertising to offer their new product to a
wide range of possible costumers, but what is the real meaning of this radio or
television commercial campaigns, some people believe that this “commercial advice”
promote to acquire not necessary items, another group of population think that
those advertisements allow us to buy new product to improve our daily life.
In my opinion, I believe that advertisement encourage to buy product to improve our lives for
three main reasons: presenting new technological tools, easier ways how to make
the things and improving the result of routinary action.
First of all, advertisements present new products or new innovation
based in the application of technology and the result of experimentation with new
devices, is common watch on tv a commercial offering a new technological accessories for your house or a new tool with some innovation as not cable connection, use of Bluetooth ore some innovative changes that are necessary in our activities, for instance one years ago I presented
many problem with the organization of my computer, many cable were on my desk and was difficult to work efficiently, one day I was watching tv and a commercial advice about a keyboard and mouse connected by wireless persuaded me to buy those new implements, now my desk is in order with less cable and more technological tools.
Furthermore, the marketing strategy of new commercial products present new and innovative manner how to make everyday actions, that make it easier and allow less time wasted in home
tasks, for example the tv show that present this kind of products demonstrates all the ways how to use it and advices how to improve your activities, in my personal experience, when I cleaned my house I had many problems to get access to the small spaces under the sofa or the fridge, but with an advertisement related with a new cleaning tool they showed how to
use all the accessories of this product as a puzzle to get access to all kind of reduced and difficult spaces to maintain a cleaning house.
Finally, advertisers directs the message of the commercial campaign of new products based in the needs of the costumers to improve the result of their daily activities, offering more efficient and low cost form in basic action as painting, washing the car or making exercises, depending
of the product offered by the industry. The object is to focus the attention of population in how to reach better result in comparison with the use of older products, for example the offer of a new laptop of the same brand, that has more capacity to process information, more sophisticate programs or accessories that allow to improve the result of the user of this kind of products.
In conclusion, the advertisement as part of the marketing strategy of the industry not only allow to sell more products, for me, but the principal advantage of the advertisement is present
an opportunity to people to improve their life, with the acquisition of those products
costumer can get access to new innovation in technology to make the daily tasks
easier and spend less time on it, and produce better result of action in comparison
with the use of old tools.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64450127877 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64484753876 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501278772379 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6450654171 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4761904762 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.619047619 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.669666563602 0.236089414692 284% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218336525725 0.076458572812 286% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162287154215 0.0737576698707 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.46260957393 0.150856017488 307% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174814342702 0.0645574589148 271% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.