Nowadays, computers are an important part of most people's everyday lives. This change has improved the way people live.
The computer is an essential, crucial invention of the 20th century. This technological innovation makes daily life more convenient and enjoyable for everyone. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay. First of all this technology has changed the whole information industry. It is an approach to interact with all types of data. Continuously, every user who has a computer with an internet has access to knowledge of numerous generations. Moreover, the computer has altered a way of communication. It provides a possibility of momentary contact between interlocutors worldwide. My own experience is a compelling example of this. While being in my room at home I have the possibility to contact with all of my friends around the whole world. Furthermore, I am able to take MIT courses, although living thousands of miles from the USA. Secondly, it optimizes the daily routine and offers new possibilities. For instance, implements setting up meetings in a calendar, buying clothes and food, sending gifts, transferring money and paying bills via the online network. Furthermore, such activities as video editing, playing video games and surfing the Internet would be simply impossible without this miracle. In such a way, people have mind-blowing possibilities, which were unthinkable in the past. It has removed many barriers, such as language, time and geography in communication. Although it has some side effects, it gives more benefits to human beings in their lives. In conclusion, I believe that computers should be a part of our lives and we should learn how to use them properly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 671, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 263.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20912547529 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11692928381 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6463878327 0.524837075471 123% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9985118652 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.1111111111 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6111111111 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72222222222 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192952311975 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509661796809 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417726726935 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192952311975 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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