Tree frog

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Tree frog

The reading and the lecture are both about the ability of tree frogs to climb hazardously slippery slopes. The author of the reading believes mucus, the liquid secreted by frogs toe pads, acts as an adhesive to help the creature climb trees and stick to slippery surfaces. The lecturer challenges the statements made by the author.

First of all, the author suggests that the pad designs works with the mucus to keep the pads permanently wet. This argument is challenged by the lecturer. He says that according to the last researches the layer of mucus is so thin that the body of a frog stays in a dry contact with a surface.

Secondly, the writer contends that the high viscosity’s level of the mucus of the White’s tree frog provides continuous covering of pads. The lecturer, however, rebuts this by asserting that due to specific design of toe the liquid drains away fast.

Finally, it is stated in the article that these frogs have extraordinary capacity to climb and grip. The lecturer, on the other hand, posits that although their possibilities are incredible, the source of power remains a mystery.

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Average: 5.9 (2 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 274, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...b trees and stick to slippery surfaces. The lecturer challenges the statements made...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 1373.03311258 68% => OK
No of words: 190.0 270.72406181 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93684210526 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71154298767 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 145.348785872 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 419.366225166 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6039323671 49.2860985944 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8 110.228320801 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.06452816374 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298171466794 0.272083759551 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103757683674 0.0996497079465 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117499758084 0.0662205650399 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159731045304 0.162205337803 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0920718056567 0.0443174109184 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 63.6247240618 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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