Nowadays, the world is developing at a very rapid pace and we are constantly forced to make a lot of choices that can affect the rest of our lives. Do you agree or disagree with the idea that should always ask someone else for help when we need to make an important decision? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
As we all know, human beings are living in the communities that being helpful toward each other for the majority of people, is important. Due to its paramount importance, efforts for elevating its effectiveness have always been among the top priority of sociologists. In this regard, many people believe that when we are going to make a crucial decision, we should ask for help from someone. Similarly to common belief, I believe that asking help has advantageous effects that help people in numerous ways. I will delve into two conspicuous reasons to elaborate on my standpoint.
The first reason that makes me hold the belief that asking other people to know their idea about our issues is crucial is related to the scientific aspect. Undoubtedly, all around the world, many people believe in science. Always many individuals who know more about a specific issue because of their education or scientific researches they have. Humans are born with an instinct to rely on scientific evidence, and a person with a knowledgeable background will fulfill this sense. Take my personal experience as an example. A couple of years ago, when I was at the university, I faced a critical situation about my research plan that required me to make a hard decision. Once, one of the friends of mine asked me to consult with an expert on that issue. Surprisingly, he proposed a simple solution that I would never have understood if I had not seen him.
Another equally noteworthy reason to bear in mind is the experience that other people may have about the issue we are exposed to. Indeed, These days, people do not look at asking help as a need; rather, they think through other`s notions, they can decide much easier and efficiently. Many critics may challenge this idea and debate that every individual`s experience is unique and can not be used by other persons, while the public viewpoint shows a different attitude toward using a simple experience by various people and in different situations. Without a doubt, sometimes the problems we have are likely the ones that parents had. What would happen if a person tried to experience a situation that could be experienced before by his parents? It just considers as wasting time. Scientifically speaking, people who try to use other individuals’ experiences in their own life will suffer less from any kind of failure in their decisions. Thus, even though people have different situations, their experiences through little manipulation can use for others as well.
To summarize, contemplating all remarks, we can safely conclude that asking people to help us in our difficult situations not only provides much more easy solutions but also prevents us from wasting time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 393, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...n, we should ask for help from someone. Similarly to common belief, I believe that asking...
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Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Always' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
... world, many people believe in science. Always many individuals who know more about a ...
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Line 5, column 675, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...at required me to make a hard decision. Once, one of the friends of mine asked me to...
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Line 11, column 608, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...a doubt, sometimes the problems we have are likely the ones that parents had. What...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, similarly, so, thus, well, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2297.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08185840708 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87950445937 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568584070796 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 721.8 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7929682125 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.409090909 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191740360241 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551613424728 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542770956458 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123750855121 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428042857143 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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