old friends vs new friends
I believe, however, there are more merits in keeping your old friends in comparison to replacing them with new friends since not only are more comfortable with them but also you spend a great deal of your time with them. In the following paragraphs, I will pinpoint my reasons.
The first point worth mentioning is that a person feels more relaxed and comfortable around his old friends. They knew each other for a long time and are familiar with each other's ideas and thought. Because of that, a person can easily without any hesitation share ideas with his friend and talk about it. Moreover, when a person faces a challenge in his future life, he can ask for help from his friend. Since old friends have a long history with each others, they care about each other well-being and will try to present solutions to problems. Consider a person who faced a problem in his job as an example. He needs to find a way to solve it and focus all his energy on his job. An old friends in this case can be helpful and can share his ideas which enable him to make the right decision.
A furthur more subtle point is that old friends are like family members that you can not replace them with other people. As a person grow up, he will make a friends in his life. Some of his relationships will continue with a specific person which after a while they become close friends. After that, they will experience new events with each others which can not be forgotten. For Instance, a person who still is in touch with his old friends has a lot of memory with him. It is possible they went to a trip, gym, and university together or even lived together. These kinds of memories are with a person for eternity and cannot be replaced with new friends since there is no background between them.
To make a long story short, it is a wise decision to keep your connection with your old friends due to feeling more safe and comfortable with them and sharing memories for the first with each other. Therefore, it is more vital to save your old relationship in comparison to making new relations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a friend' or simply 'friends'?
Suggestion: a friend; friends
...ople. As a person grow up, he will make a friends in his life. Some of his relationships ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47757255937 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35168589517 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490765171504 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7022821007 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3157894737 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9473684211 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63157894737 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256333577257 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095572148475 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759796667066 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1924651957 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243018766467 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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