old friendship or new friendship
Friendship is always important for human being. As we always said human being is social animal. Some people agree to making new friends everyday some prefer to stick with their old friends. I am the person who likes to be in contact with old friends because of the following reasons.
First of all, we get to know each other after some time and it is necessary for human beings to be in long term relationship with another human being and finally get to know her and it takes time to learn from each other's behaviour. It is not something that we can know or achieve by one night friendship. Nowadays kids learn to sleep over and really know their friend.
Moreover, our long term relationship help us to know humanity of the friends more better. Humanity consist of several bahaviours thrust, reliability, liability, leadership, finally sense of humour. For example we know about our best friend and how her humanity impresses others when she gets divorce we will always by her side and helped her.
Furthermore, if we have a close fridnd we will treat him/her like one of our family members. We will give our kidney for her if she worhts that much to us. For example my best friend had a divorce and we were the one like her family members who helped her in this hard occasion. We get through every step hand by hand.
In summary, I strongly believe that It is not something that we can know or achieve by one day friendship. We need to be a friend as the expression goes the friend in need is the friend indeed.
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Essay evaluation report
our long term relationship help us
our long term relationship helps us
Humanity consist of several bahaviours
Humanity consists of several bahaviours
Sentence: Furthermore, if we have a close fridnd we will treat him/her like one of our family members.
Error: fridnd Suggestion: friend
Sentence: We will give our kidney for her if she worhts that much to us.
Error: worhts Suggestion: worths
flaws:
No. of Different Words: 146 200
Some issues on the fourth paragraph: Need to compare old friends and new friends too in this paragraph.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 19 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 277 350
No. of Characters: 1210 1500
No. of Different Words: 146 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.08 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.368 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.274 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 79 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 50 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 26 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.312 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.886 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.562 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.349 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.596 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.257 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ip is always important for human being. As we always said human being is social an...
^^
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...Some people agree to making new friends everyday some prefer to stick with their old fri...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...er and it takes time to learn from each others behaviour. It is not something that we ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...help us to know humanity of the friends more better. Humanity consist of several bahaviours...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Humanity consist of several bahaviours thrust, reliability, liability, leadersh...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'moreover', 'really', 'so', 'for example', 'in summary', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.203333333333 0.229887763892 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.166666666667 0.158761421928 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0766666666667 0.0866891130778 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0533333333333 0.046263068375 115% => OK
Pronouns: 0.12 0.0685040099705 175% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.13 0.118717715034 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0133333333333 0.0351676179071 38% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.39017320634 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0366666666667 0.0309702414327 118% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.06 0.0887237588012 68% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0166666666667 0.0209618222197 80% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0133333333333 0.0139019557991 96% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1524.0 2387.08602151 64% => OK
No of words: 276.0 408.028673835 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52173913043 5.86048508987 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.48200974243 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.29347826087 0.338922669872 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.202898550725 0.251872472559 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.108695652174 0.174417080927 62% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0724637681159 0.112833075102 64% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39017320634 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525362318841 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 51.8358900661 59.2087087015 88% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 17.25 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.169083384 48.84282405 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.25 120.699889404 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.644075263715 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 37.5398550725 45.7405998639 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.01960784314 1.45489161554 70% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0929383126137 0.300154397459 31% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.126925171638 0.103427244359 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.107843609826 0.0752933317313 143% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.531669227688 0.497263757937 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.139791135406 0.151897553556 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419100616253 0.114077575197 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698435063553 0.0781384742642 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.251231073301 0.336927656856 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0492843825417 0.067059652881 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0605512008943 0.210909579961 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563152152843 0.0618886996521 91% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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