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I absolutely agree with second statement.according to my point of view,it is better to have specialized knowledge in one specific subject than have broad knowledge of many academic subjects.I hold that opinion because of several reasons.first,it seems to me that if someone wants to become successful in his life and achieve beneficial results in his academic experiences,he should focus on a specialized subject,instead of superficial knowledge in various subjects.second,broad knowledge of many academic subjects seems less pragmatic and practical than specialized science.third,if a person decided to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects,his chance of finding job in modern societies is low.
as far as I concerned,if someone determines to become successful in his routine life and achieve to his targets,he should concentrate on one profession specially and vehemently than focus on many academic subjects superficially.in other words,it seems to me kind of wasting time,if ones spend his time and budget on studying various subjects not seriously,because it will not conduced to a good results.
moreover,broad knowledge of many academic subjects seems less pragmatic than specialized science,because in the educational life it is necessary to have one specialized profession.for instance,my cousin who is 26 years old,decided to find a job after he graduated from university.at first,he interested in finding a job,which related to his major subject,but because he was not good at his subject,and he had only some superficial knowledge about various subjects, after three months he disappointed,because he could not find an appropriate job.so he changed his mind and determined to apply on another job,which was not related to his profession. however,broad knowledge of many academic subjects seems less practical in compare with specialized science,because ones want to find a job,he should enable to convince the employer that he specialized in certain knowledge,and being a normal person,who has knowledge of many academic subjects superficially,seems inadequate for finding a good job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, third, for instance, kind of, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7845659164 4.8611393121 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.8156324891 2.67179642975 143% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504823151125 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 77.0 20.1344086022 382% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 153.19493301 48.9658058833 313% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 449.75 100.406767564 448% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 77.75 20.6045352989 377% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.75 5.45110844103 417% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 40.0 5.5376344086 722% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112914711257 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963444508719 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520660841323 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10525902694 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550912384541 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 44.7 11.7677419355 380% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -23.6 58.1214874552 -41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 22.1 6.10430107527 362% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 35.7 10.1575268817 351% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.43 10.9000537634 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.37 8.01818996416 142% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 67.0 10.002688172 670% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.8 10.0537634409 326% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 45.0 10.247311828 439% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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