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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... statement.according to my point of view,it is better to have specialized knowledge...
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Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...oad knowledge of many academic subjects.I hold that opinion because of several re...
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Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...opinion because of several reasons.first,it seems to me that if someone wants to be...
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Line 1, column 372, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , he
...cial results in his academic experiences,he should focus on a specialized subject,i...
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Line 1, column 413, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , instead
...he should focus on a specialized subject,instead of superficial knowledge in various sub...
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Line 1, column 473, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , broad
...ial knowledge in various subjects.second,broad knowledge of many academic subjects see...
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Line 1, column 581, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...practical than specialized science.third,if a person decided to have broad knowledg...
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Line 1, column 651, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , his
...road knowledge of many academic subjects,his chance of finding job in modern societi...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: As
...nding job in modern societies is low. as far as I concerned,if someone determin...
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Line 2, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n modern societies is low. as far as I concerned,if someone determines to becom...
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Line 2, column 23, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...cieties is low. as far as I concerned,if someone determines to become successful...
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Line 2, column 113, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , he
... routine life and achieve to his targets,he should concentrate on one profession sp...
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Line 2, column 244, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , it
...ic subjects superficially.in other words,it seems to me kind of wasting time,if one...
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Line 2, column 280, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , if
...ords,it seems to me kind of wasting time,if ones spend his time and budget on study...
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Line 2, column 357, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , because
... studying various subjects not seriously,because it will not conduced to a good results....
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Line 2, column 378, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'conduce'
Suggestion: conduce
...jects not seriously,because it will not conduced to a good results. moreover,broad know...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...t will not conduced to a good results. moreover,broad knowledge of many academic subjec...
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Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , broad
...ot conduced to a good results. moreover,broad knowledge of many academic subjects see...
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Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , because
... less pragmatic than specialized science,because in the educational life it is necessar...
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Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...agmatic than specialized science,because in the educational life it is necessary ...
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Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , my
... one specialized profession.for instance,my cousin who is 26 years old,decided to f...
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Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , decided
...r instance,my cousin who is 26 years old,decided to find a job after he graduated from ...
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Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...years old,decided to find a job after he graduated from university.at first,he i...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , he
...r he graduated from university.at first,he interested in finding a job,which rel...
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Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...e graduated from university.at first,he interested in finding a job,which relat...
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Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , which
...at first,he interested in finding a job,which related to his major subject,but becau...
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Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st,he interested in finding a job,which related to his major subject,but because...
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Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
... job,which related to his major subject,but because he was not good at his subject,...
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Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , and
...t because he was not good at his subject,and he had only some superficial knowledge ...
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Line 3, column 504, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , because
...ects, after three months he disappointed,because he could not find an appropriate job.so...
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Line 3, column 611, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , which
...d and determined to apply on another job,which was not related to his profession. howe...
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Line 3, column 652, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...hich was not related to his profession. however,broad knowledge of many academic subjec...
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Line 3, column 659, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , broad
...s not related to his profession. however,broad knowledge of many academic subjects see...
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Line 3, column 758, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , because
...ical in compare with specialized science,because ones want to find a job,he should enab...
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Line 3, column 790, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , he
... science,because ones want to find a job,he should enable to convince the employer...
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Line 3, column 800, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...ecause ones want to find a job,he should enable to convince the employer that he ...
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Line 3, column 841, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... enable to convince the employer that he specialized in certain knowledge,and bei...
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Line 3, column 875, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...hat he specialized in certain knowledge,and being a normal person,who has knowledge...
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Line 3, column 901, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , who
...tain knowledge,and being a normal person,who has knowledge of many academic subjects...
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Line 3, column 959, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , seems
... of many academic subjects superficially,seems inadequate for finding a good job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, third, for instance, kind of, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7845659164 4.8611393121 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.8156324891 2.67179642975 143% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504823151125 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 77.0 20.1344086022 382% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 153.19493301 48.9658058833 313% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 449.75 100.406767564 448% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 77.75 20.6045352989 377% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.75 5.45110844103 417% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 40.0 5.5376344086 722% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112914711257 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963444508719 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520660841323 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10525902694 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550912384541 0.0645574589148 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 44.7 11.7677419355 380% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -23.6 58.1214874552 -41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 22.1 6.10430107527 362% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 35.7 10.1575268817 351% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.43 10.9000537634 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.37 8.01818996416 142% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 67.0 10.002688172 670% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.8 10.0537634409 326% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 45.0 10.247311828 439% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.