One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job.
Do you agree or disagree?
In today's hectic city of life that trials and tribulations do shine day in day out people bend over backward and make their efforts so as to achieve success in their personal life. Indeed, every mature human being has to admit that success is a blank dream without difficulties. Stemming from this fact, a relevant question that is a moot point is whether individuals should take some time and think about what they want to do or take the risk while doing something. Due to the controversial nature of this question, there is not a general argument on this issue. I am, however, to a great extent of the conviction that if people think about their tasks and do not come up with an idiotic decision, they will ensure their future life to become successful individuals. The following paragraphs will aptly substantiate my personal stance.
To commence with, vast majorities of people are looking for success around the globe and making progress day in day out is of utmost important goal in their lives. Generally phrased, Today's the lifestyle has changed at a very swift pace with the advent of sophisticated technology. So, people are not familiar with every aspect of different phenomena. In fact, this rapid pace makes people think wisely and deeply about their decisions and try to take some time in order to make sure everything is correct. As a vivid example, human beings are not familiar with consequences of each task and they should take positive and negative effects of works into consideration owing to the fact that they cannot take them into account in the spur of the moment. To elucidate more on this issue, take some time for thinking about events not only can guarantee people's success but also can help them enhance their self-esteem and self-confidence drastically.
Another reason that should not go unnoticed is that people could get some help from other experienced people who may confront the similar situation as people come across. In fact, there are myriads of mature, knowledgeable and experienced people in every given society that could come up with the best idea. These ideas provide fertile ground for people to address their problems and tasks easily and quickly and not to do something wrong. Going into the depth, people in this way will learn how to handle various situations and how to investigate different ideas proposed by others. As a matter of fact, hardly can people make sure everything is correct if they do not pay attention to the other options. However, in some case, people have to make a right decision or come up with an immediate risk. For instance, many people are not aware of many results and are not able to unforeseen consequences of each task. So, they have to take risks very often and see the outcome without precise and meticulous thinking.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...nd over backward and make their efforts so as to achieve success in their personal life....
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, while, as to, for instance, in fact, as a matter of fact, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2375.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 487.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87679671458 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58202427902 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517453798768 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 756.9 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0495145265 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.095238095 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1904761905 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153912727607 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445405182759 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471523575328 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863089199964 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555405653315 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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