Only movies that can teach us something about real life are worth watching.
It goes without saying that watching movies is one of the most enjoyable hobbies for todays’ people. There has been a controversial debate among people liking to watch movies as to whether movies having precious information are worth watching. From my perspective, all movies being informative or not are worth watching at least once, and two reasons to support my view are presented as follow.
To begin with, watching movies without noticing they are instructive or not, people are able to enjoy the living. It Is not a secret to anyone that people living in the past time were used to working all day, so they did not have a lot of free time for entertainment; they used to work in their farmlands and take care of cattle. On the other hand, in todays’ world people are not so occupied since the development of technology and science facilitate the way that we are living. As a result, different types of entertainments have emerged through which todays’ individuals being young and old can make the most us of leisure time. doing activities such as playing video games, going to the movies and so on, citizens have an opportunity to get rid of their stress and enjoy better mental health. To put it in more vivid picture, when I was studying for TOEFL exam I felt frustrated because I had spent most of my time learning a foreign language, but after two months studying I decided to devote time to watching movies and series, which helped me a lot although they were not informative, I was able to focus on learning English significantly well. Had I not dedicated time to having fun by watching movies, I would have been overwhelmed with stress for the rest of my studying time. as you can see, it does not matter that we watch instructive movies or not, we could take the advantage of their stories and enjoy more.
Furthermore, watching all kinds of movies will help us to be more knowledgeable people. It is crystal clear that every movie has its own story, which is worth watching because every story has certain points. I am of the opinion that every story is valuable because there definitely is some sorts of traditions and cultures, thus we can be familiar with different lines of thoughts, opinions, and believes, which is beneficial because it increases our information about different variety of people living all over the world. Rarely can we find a movie not having any signs of culture. Needless to say, knowing a lot about the variety of cultures, languages, and viewpoints, we are being considered as individuals who is knowledgeable. As you can see, every movie worth watching because every story worth understanding, therefore we will be informed of a lot of amazing things.
In sum, not only will people enjoy the living since they can escape from the clutches of stress, they will also acquire a lot of valuable information.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...ate among people liking to watch movies as to whether movies having precious information are ...
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Line 1, column 385, Rule ID: AS_FOLLOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
Suggestion: as follows
...easons to support my view are presented as follow. To begin with, watching movies withou...
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Line 2, column 169, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...ret to anyone that people living in the past time were used to working all day, so they d...
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Line 2, column 632, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Doing
...d can make the most us of leisure time. doing activities such as playing video games,...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...tress for the rest of my studying time. as you can see, it does not matter that we...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... acquire a lot of valuable information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, at least, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2367.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 495.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78181818182 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70198980442 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484848484848 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 740.7 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.6149356426 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.5 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225473880431 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083946737398 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536379604767 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142631298688 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603207531078 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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