The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.
People have always been making various opportunities for handling their life in a smart way, however, they may influence by others opinions more when they are younger. As a matter of fact, I agree with the statement and I will explicit my points of view through the following paragraph.
One of the reasons that coming to my mind at the first place is the younger people often influenced by their friends. Young adults need to have a hero and they will find it in famous people like artists and athletes.
in addition, lack of experiences and knowledge in children make them go with others opinions which are sometimes not perfect for their living. They will dream about the artist or the athlete that they like. They will see themselves in that mirror and they change their hairstyle to be like them or they buy the posters and they wear a shirt with a special picture of the athlete on them.
Another noteworthy aspect that should be addressed in this ongoing explanation is older people not only have more observations and experiences but also, they have more responsibilities. Older people do not have time to see game or movies, for instance, I do not remember my father watching a movie. He always read and listens to the news because I believe he wanted to be well-informed.
To sum up, a well-known entertainer can have more impact on younger than the older people. This is because of different views and experiences also, responsibilities and time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: In
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, well, for instance, in addition, as a matter of fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 253.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77865612648 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73739314891 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569169960474 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 618.680645161 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3901752478 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.75 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291656721643 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996525930155 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863651253995 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158292524482 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359988857452 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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