Parents are the best teacher. Do you agree or disagree?
When it comes to the issue the best teacher for a child, some people believe that parents are the best teacher for children. However, others have the opposite view. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. I take this position on account for the following reasons.
First and the most important reason is that children can better learn by parents. From the emotional angel, the bond between parents and children are so tough that children accept their teaching more than others. Indeed, this causes children have more abeyance of parents and easily accept what they say. I think that a small example can give some light on this matter. We all had some teachers in the school that we had a good relationship with them, which lead us to learn their lesson better. So, having an emotional relationship puts parent on the unique position than other teachers.
A further point we must consider is that parents’ teachings are permanent. In fact, parents start our teaching process as soon as we are born and never stop it. In initial years of our life, they teach us to speak, to walk, what is right and wrong, and also being a good social member. Moreover, they always have time to listen to our problems and assist us to find solution and deal with difficult situation. Also, we can use their experience, which is priceless treasure, when we need to have them.
Apart from all points I made above parents play a crucial role to build our character. It is quite normal that children should study in the formal education, while it can not reason to ignore parents’ teaching. Although parents do not suppose to teach biology, mathematics, or academic field of study, they involve much to give us significant lessons such as being independent, strong and confident, embracing challenge and cope with various conditions.
All above evidence supports this undeniable fact that parents are the best teacher because their teaching is effective, permanent, and they builds our personality. Of course, as an English proverb goes “a coin has two sides”; therefore, those who take the opposite view are partly reasonable that parents have not knowledge on all academic areas. Nonetheless, I strongly believe that its profits outweigh dangerous. Last but not least, I hope that parents be aware of this point that they should not impose their idea on children.
Comments
Essay evaluation report by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 141, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'build'
Suggestion: build
...ching is effective, permanent, and they builds our personality. Of course, as an Engli...
^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'apart from', 'i think', 'in fact', 'of course', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.206451612903 0.229887763892 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.156989247312 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103225806452 0.0866891130778 119% => OK
Adverbs: 0.058064516129 0.046263068375 126% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0838709677419 0.0685040099705 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.101075268817 0.118717715034 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0172043010753 0.0351676179071 49% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.5572586964 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0258064516129 0.0309702414327 83% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0774193548387 0.0887237588012 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0150537634409 0.0209618222197 72% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0150537634409 0.0139019557991 108% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2397.0 2387.08602151 100% => OK
No of words: 402.0 408.028673835 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96268656716 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.353233830846 0.338922669872 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.26368159204 0.251872472559 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.169154228856 0.174417080927 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0995024875622 0.112833075102 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5572586964 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564676616915 0.524397521467 108% => OK
Word variations: 65.8701652008 59.2087087015 111% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.2727272727 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8640868525 48.84282405 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.954545455 120.699889404 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.681818181818 0.644075263715 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 44.6408864767 45.7405998639 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.08633093525 1.45489161554 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210852903199 0.300154397459 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0847237058188 0.103427244359 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0667103849863 0.0752933317313 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.477177855545 0.497263757937 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.118701497398 0.151897553556 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071426664468 0.114077575197 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753630470964 0.0781384742642 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.267243094818 0.336927656856 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0437423397245 0.067059652881 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140150399108 0.210909579961 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722101618384 0.0618886996521 117% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 141, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'build'
Suggestion: build
...ching is effective, permanent, and they builds our personality. Of course, as an Engli...
^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'apart from', 'i think', 'in fact', 'of course', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.206451612903 0.229887763892 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.156989247312 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103225806452 0.0866891130778 119% => OK
Adverbs: 0.058064516129 0.046263068375 126% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0838709677419 0.0685040099705 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.101075268817 0.118717715034 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0172043010753 0.0351676179071 49% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.5572586964 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0258064516129 0.0309702414327 83% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0774193548387 0.0887237588012 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0150537634409 0.0209618222197 72% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0150537634409 0.0139019557991 108% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2397.0 2387.08602151 100% => OK
No of words: 402.0 408.028673835 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96268656716 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.353233830846 0.338922669872 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.26368159204 0.251872472559 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.169154228856 0.174417080927 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0995024875622 0.112833075102 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5572586964 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564676616915 0.524397521467 108% => OK
Word variations: 65.8701652008 59.2087087015 111% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.2727272727 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8640868525 48.84282405 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.954545455 120.699889404 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.681818181818 0.644075263715 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 44.6408864767 45.7405998639 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.08633093525 1.45489161554 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210852903199 0.300154397459 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0847237058188 0.103427244359 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0667103849863 0.0752933317313 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.477177855545 0.497263757937 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.118701497398 0.151897553556 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071426664468 0.114077575197 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753630470964 0.0781384742642 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.267243094818 0.336927656856 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0437423397245 0.067059652881 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140150399108 0.210909579961 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722101618384 0.0618886996521 117% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.