Parents should take important decision for their older teenage children. Do you agree or disagree?
our family is the best source of advices that we have. when parents choose a way for their old teenages to go, mom and dad are trying to sort the best for their kids. Different reasons show us that people who are part of our family always do all efforts to make us happy. Expecting a great future for their youth, having a previous experience, or just loving their children forever, parents usually get the correct choice.
While we are young, we never think seriously about the next years. most of teenages prefer to enjoy today than to think about tomorrow. Otherwise, the future is closer than we can imagine. This is a very important reason why parents should take decisions for their kids. Because when children realize, time has gone.
Nothing is better than a good life experience. As we get older, we absorb good and bad moments. These distinct situations prepare us for a new challenge in the next years. Due to previous situations, tutors can make their kids' life easier.
Sometimes we see teenagers saying that a friend gave them a wonderful tip. But in the average, others youths do not have the same feeling of love that our familly has with us. loving their children more than everything, parents will be our greatest friends forever. So, any information that they give has the most important feeling, which is love, inside.
To conclude, I totally agree with the idea that dad and mom have to take essencial decisions for their kids. using their experiences with other situations, thinking about the teenagers' future, and always mixing love in each advice, parents have the greatest informations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 277.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85559566787 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40897309052 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58844765343 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1938381262 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.7894736842 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5789473684 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.947368421053 5.45110844103 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314903375077 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085021449944 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954477178372 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165479599515 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584952398287 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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