It is more interesting to read a good book or see a good movie the second time than the first

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It is more interesting to read a good book or see a good movie the second time than the first.

When we have a chance to read a book or watch a movie for the second time, we can enjoy more. Thinking better about the main topic, paying more attention at the interesting parts, and fixing the whole history easier, let us to have a good entertainment.
While we have a chance to see a movie or read a book for the first opportunity, sometimes we cannot realize about the real approach inside the film’s or book’s theme. Due to this reason, when we get a second chance to figure out all the informations, the movie or book seems to be more wonderful.
Secondly, during our first contact with a new source of information, normally we don’t absorve each detail. Consequently, when we get a second chance with a documentary or magazine, we can let the main topic out of our attention and just get the minimun details about the history. This experience let us to fix better the whole history.
Additionally, the second time let us to enjoy a better entertainment. Due to our knowledge on what comes next, our brain will not be surprised. Even if some people prefer the unexpected feeling, usually this sensation distracts us and disturbs the way that we enjoy the book or movie. So, our capacity of fixing the history is worst.
To conclude, seeing a movie or reading a book for the second or third time has a better cost benefit ratio. Getting better our attention, making the history easier to understand, and fixing better our entertainment, is absolutely a marvelous sensation.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 260.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72692307692 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79353384818 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507692307692 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4811570539 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5384615385 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25625789426 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933403365676 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967146538388 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15438722373 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966473632878 0.0645574589148 150% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

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