Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more interesting to read a good book or see a good movie the second time than the first. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I fond of watching movies, some movies I like to watch multiple times becasue they are so good but when we talk about interest in watching good movies in first view or second. So in this I feel more interesting to watch in first time. The reasons for holding this opinion are explained below.
To begin with, I love to watch movie, although not much interested in books, anyway that is not a concern. I mostly watch movies that has sequel and I always wait for the next sequel as I am done with previous and whenever it get released I watch on the same day. This is because the previous one had left with so many questions to be answered, many secretes to reveal and suspense to be upcome and I feel first show would be more interesting to reply my all these questions. When I watch the same movie for second time I already knew what is going to happen and remian saying okay know this is going to happen and anything like this. So, this is how movies are seen, It need to have all these story revealing thing with time, which I don't think can be felt in second time. To explain above point I like to give my own example, when Spider man: far away from home get released I booked tickets in advance and watch that in first show, but my friends had some some work so they could not come. Then after some time they ask me if I can give them company so I joined and there they all are reacting, crying when aunt may died and reacted on many scene and I was reacting so normally because that is no more interesting and new to me at that time. So for suspenses and interest I feel first watch is always best.
To carry on further, some people like to watch the movies on second time and find it more interesting for several reasons like they understand better in second time, they not only see the movie, they like to focus on cinematograpy, do prediction what will happen in next. Same goes with book. When we read something , we zone out and misses some important point and that sometime were key lines but when we read it second time we link these thing and feel that is why this happened and anything similar to this. I always read or watch just once and move on to next thing because this is my concept of investing time on these things but one of my friends , she is very interesting in reading books again and again, and she find that interesting even on tenth read. I feel she is so much interested because her interest is in literature. Now she has to give time her studies to major subject then I feel investing time on single thing for interest is also a matter of who have how much time to invest on something.
To put in nutshell I always feel more interest in reading and watching movies for the first time and I disagree with given line that people find it interesting to watch and read the second time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gets'?
Suggestion: gets
...I am done with previous and whenever it get released I watch on the same day. This ...
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Line 3, column 689, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this story' or 'these stories'?
Suggestion: this story; these stories
...ow movies are seen, It need to have all these story revealing thing with time, which I dont...
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Line 3, column 736, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...tory revealing thing with time, which I dont think can be felt in second time. To ex...
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Line 3, column 955, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: some
... that in first show, but my friends had some some work so they could not come. Then after...
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Line 3, column 1140, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun scene seems to be countable; consider using: 'many scenes'.
Suggestion: many scenes
...rying when aunt may died and reacted on many scene and I was reacting so normally because ...
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Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e goes with book. When we read something , we zone out and misses some important p...
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Line 5, column 327, Rule ID: CONFUSION_OF_OUR_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
... book. When we read something , we zone out and misses some important point and tha...
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Line 5, column 416, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seconds'?
Suggestion: seconds
...time were key lines but when we read it second time we link these thing and feel that ...
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Line 5, column 436, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this thing' or 'these things'?
Suggestion: this thing; these things
...but when we read it second time we link these thing and feel that is why this happened and ...
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Line 5, column 654, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...me on these things but one of my friends , she is very interesting in reading book...
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Line 5, column 723, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'finds'.
Suggestion: finds
... reading books again and again, and she find that interesting even on tenth read. I ...
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Line 5, column 967, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
... thing for interest is also a matter of who have how much time to invest on somethi...
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Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g and watching movies for the first time and I disagree with given line that peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, if, may, second, so, then, as to, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2286.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 535.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27289719626 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80937282943 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19633847756 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.426168224299 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 723.6 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.7875179392 48.9658058833 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7222222222 20.6045352989 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241158853294 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09623748311 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608110306711 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200978627741 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494717246897 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.1575268817 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.08 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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