Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television does not give people an accurate view of human nature. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People who perform on television are known as actor/actresses, as name depict that they only act and obviously apart of their true nature. so i agree that television does not give true human nature. I explain this in below reasons.
To begin with, we need to understand the meaning of acting "people perform the action which is artificially created". So, we can say that acting is all based on something which is not true. We see in movies that single actor/ actresses perform role of different character in different movie and it can't be true that single person has multiple nature. They just asked to act in a particular way and get the payment for that. They perform the character as per instructed by producer, even hand movement, lipsing every thing should be done as per thought by producer, so television just represent the character made by producer, there would be no reality. This shows that television would never give an accurate view of human nature.
To carry on further the other question raises is that, what about reality shows? so I feel that realities shows just present the talent they have in them. For examples, dancers, singers,comedians and many more. I think we can say that this is more of their interest and talent rather than nature. I feel in such a way because I saw in interviews that many comedian in in fact sad, this is really a irony of world that people who make everyone laugh is themselves sad. So this shows not only television daily channel even reality show are not real. The only thing which is feel real is interview of person, because they just directly ask celebrities the question and their way of response, way they handle sometime critices situation is the reflection of their nature.
To sum up I feel television is for entertainment purpose where mostly things are unreal that why these are known as reel life and I strongly agree that television depicts inaccurate nature of human being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, for example, i feel, i think, in fact, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81008902077 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67356580379 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528189910979 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0138392344 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3529411765 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115745648868 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453196305345 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766284306033 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902756286411 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472769031073 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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