In order for any work of art — for example, a film, a novel, a poem, or a song — to have merit, it must be understandable to most people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Yes it is indispensible that any work of art like film, novel,poem must be understandable by people to get merit because if it is arcane then it will not get response that artist have behind their presentation.
First thought behind agreeing above statement is people are the one who make something very famous or flop .people are the audience of all bove stated arts and that way its necessary that they understand arts. Presentation should be succinct so that motive behind doing so is pellucid. If all art work is understandable by people then they surely discuss it with their other friends and this way particular art will become famous.
Second thought is why these arts are presented?, obviously to convey some message so it must be in the way that people understand and take some points from that. suppose some painter presented the image to save earth and save natural resourses and if it's not presented in simple way then there is no use of it. Despite of that if its simple and understandable so that people can support it and take further step to support artist view.
If every content of them is so hard to understand and boring then that will not be beneficial. For example some movie released in theater and people went to see it but it is not understable by them and they feel like they have wasted their time and definitely they will give negative feedback about it, they may feel like , movie uses so much of fancy in every thing and this make to hard to understand and also enjoyed less. so it does not get merit and of no benefit to people and presenter.
so to sumup it must be necessary that presentation should be presented acoording to people and make them convey their thought behind these art , then only they get merit of their work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...em convey their thought behind these art , then only they get merit of their work....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 315.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59682539683 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51348105216 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469841269841 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.7506011148 60.3974514979 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.636363636 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6363636364 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197635284249 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857018164975 0.0831039109588 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643892276265 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132249190801 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638284954691 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 48.8420337079 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 12.1743820225 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 100.480337079 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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