New business owner should check own business or join franchise.
The article is about the owning business, here the author states that it is better to take license of franchise, and do that business instead of owning own business because that would be less risky and more beneficial and to explain that author stated some of his points in below paragraphs. However the professor sees flaws in each paragraph and disagrees with that and stated owning own business is more beneficial.
To begin with, the author stated that first time business owner find difficulty in setting up business, and collecting materials, equipment. So, to avoid management they should work in franchise where everything is fixed. So, in this opinion, the professor finds flaws and explained that franchise has fixed good and shop where the company has to buy, but these good are overpriced. Also, if the owner find the same material in cheaper price they are not allow to buy from there. So, this causes loss to owner.
To move on the another reason author support franchise, advertisement. The author states that new business need to advertise for their product, and these franchise already does that. The professor again disagrees with this point and stated that although it is true that franchise do advertise but they take 6% from the owner, which is a lot money. The professor further added that they advertise their company product and this causes little benefit. Instead if person advertise for own business that would be less costly and advertise own business.
The another point made by author is that franchise offer more security than an independent business as starting few years have high chances for failure. In this the professor agrees that indeed independent businesses have chances of failure but owning a franchise is also not the solution. The person can buy the already existing business from previous owner, and that would be more beneficial rather than working in franchise.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 293, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...some of his points in below paragraphs. However the professor sees flaws in each paragr...
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Line 3, column 457, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'allowed'.
Suggestion: allowed
... material in cheaper price they are not allow to buy from there. So, this causes loss...
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Line 3, column 463, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'buying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: buying
...ial in cheaper price they are not allow to buy from there. So, this causes loss to own...
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Line 5, column 349, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...% from the owner, which is a lot money. The professor further added that they adver...
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Line 5, column 451, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...product and this causes little benefit. Instead if person advertise for own business th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, as to, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 7.30242825607 219% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1373.03311258 117% => OK
No of words: 316.0 270.72406181 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09493670886 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48519893526 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493670886076 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 419.366225166 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5219328127 49.2860985944 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 110.228320801 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 21.698381199 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06452816374 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327511509785 0.272083759551 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113458156158 0.0996497079465 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705832717528 0.0662205650399 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206426745532 0.162205337803 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316401635656 0.0443174109184 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.3589403974 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.