If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose? Explain your choice.
If I have the opportunity to study a new subject to add in my life experience, I would like to choose martial arts. I can think about many reasons that make me about this area as a good choice. But as some examples on how martial arts can be helpful I can say that they are a good way to get in shape, also a new possibility to make money, and a great chance to find new friends.
The first reason to choose martial arts as a new knowledge in my life is due to an improvement in health. Practicing a sport is well known as a good way to maintain our body functions working good. Additionally, martial arts can help me to get in shape while I am taking care of my body.
Nowadays, having an opportunity to improve our incomes is a very good reason to find a second job. According to some friends of mine, they started a new job as martial arts’s professors and it made their monthly incomes higher. However, it takes a long time to become a martial arts’s master and the way is not easy as well.
My last reason to think about martial arts as an opportunity in my life is the pleasure to make new friends at the gym. Having a new place to go and good people to share our life’s experience make us better people. Also, I love to improve the number of friends that I have.
To conclude, martial arts would be my first choice as a new opportunity of knowledge. Getting better health, improving my incomes, and making newer friends are good reasons to think about it. Unfortunately, I will not have enough time to introduce a new activity in my life in the next months.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 45, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'new knowledge'.
Suggestion: new knowledge
... first reason to choose martial arts as a new knowledge in my life is due to an improvement in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 299.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28093645485 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52655608355 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481605351171 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.0 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4781529381 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.3333333333 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0752289508906 0.236089414692 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367083358599 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599869659141 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0499318642783 0.150856017488 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277471203666 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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