In the past, it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.

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In the past, it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.

Throughout of history, humans being have been putting all of their efforts to find a suitable job. As humans living in civilized societies, we all need a good job which provide a better future, and a well social position. since the advent of technology, new careers were appeared. this concept has played a dominant role in individuals' way of living, but there exists a controversy and heated debate among some people regarding upcoming jobs, and future of jobs. some people are inclining toward the opinion that the dawn of technology and other sciences make a safety condition for your vocation and you can have a better future, whereas others hold exactly the opposite perspective. I agree with prior idea, and in the subsequent paragraphs, I will explicate the most outstanding reasons and provide some details which can aptly elucidate my point of view.

The most prominent point to be mention is that having a competent job plays a signification and undeniable role in one's success and happiness. since the advent of technology, new positions created, and many graduates could have good jobs and good salaries. but these sciences are advancing rapidly, and this feature cause a lot of merit and demerit. these progress of knowledge can make the better life, and establish new jobs which obsolete previous occupations. For instance, one of the big and success companies, Nokia, was victim of science progress when it could not update and adapt itself. Hence, it was abolished and its employees were fired.

Another equally and exquisite point that I want to mention regarding job's future, is political conditions. since the dawn of civilization, many developing countries are experiencing different status. this issue changes the jobs future. For example, my country, Iran, face to many political problems and it causes bad condition for the many companies and factories. In Sharif university of Tehran, one of the most prestigious universities in my country, a very reliable research conducted recently which encompassed the impact of politics on jobs, and revealed that 60 percent of small companies were closed.

In short, all the aforementioned reasons led us to the conclusion that these days many situations play a important role in jobs. contrary to the past, you have to update your knowledge and consider the political sate constantly.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, regarding, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in short

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23884514436 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79821540232 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564304461942 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6051490914 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.052631579 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0526315789 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26315789474 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118108720838 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403408713866 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396050641169 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659892164344 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282487994412 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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