In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
It goes without saying that in todays sophisticated world where we live in, all the aspects of life, relationship, and respect have been changed related to the past. There is no doubt that nowadays, young people are more independant and free-rider. Plenty of people holds the conviction that the young generation are capable to decide for themselves, whereas others might hold precisely the opposite view. I firmly endorse the first conviction instead of the later one. The reasons substantiating my viewpoint are investigated in the following essay.
The first point to be mentioned is that nowadays, people are more educated and have more information about every thing. Hence, they are able to decide better and flawless. The young generation are not seperated from this situation, They are more informed compared to past and they have the access to the data they need as well. So, there is no concern about their disadvantage compared to their parents. I will exemplify my point with a true story about my mother. She always tell us that at past they were not able to chose their major at high school. but, now she confirm that her own children know better than her in many areas.
Alongside the elaborated reason above, another idea that is noteworthy to consider is that youngsters are more risk-taker compared to the past generation. This aspect if very critical to become independant; therefore, improve people's ability to make decision. For instance, when I was getting my master's degree, I was wondering whether should I take a break after my master and work for a while or should I start my PhD immedietly. If I was in past and dependant to my parents and they were in charge of every thing for me, I definitly would obeyed them and continued my master with no gap. Fottunately, because I was aware of my major's job market I chose to work for couple years and it was life changing for me.
As shown above, taking all the reasons and points into account, it is my firm belief that our generation is capable to decide better for itself and we do not need our parents to does it fo us. This is because today, young generation is more knowledgable and they take more risks in their daily lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: confirms
...heir major at high school. but, now she confirm that her own children know better than ...
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...f every thing for me, I definitly would obeyed them and continued my master with no ga...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for instance, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77083333333 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60445310925 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5390625 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4832376916 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4210526316 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2105263158 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31578947368 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244520904375 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699722726994 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469530505403 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13883821039 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257139065475 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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