People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Education is the gate of a better future and numerous researches concluded that people with higher education most likely to stay out of the prison, have no debt and have better quality of life than someone who doesn’t have diploma. One of the ways to get higher education is to attend college or university.
Attending university is one of the human milestones. It gives people illusion about honor, prestige, and success, however, it also hides the dark side. College tuition rises every year and pushed the student to have enormous debt even before they graduate. Student loan is the heaviest burden that young adult can have. Even though in some country, college is free, the pressure to do well and to get higher GPA can lead a student to depression and in the severe case, suicide. With all the trouble, why still so many people, including myself, would like to attend university? For me there are three major reasons, why I pursue a degree in university, instead get a job and gain experience from there. After all, school not the only way to gain skill and knowledge.
First, University offers advanced knowledge and skill like no other. When someone loves something you loved and doing it for almost 40 years, teach you his/her experienced. You can be sure, you will gain insight better than anyone else. I can’t think a better way to spend your youth than to learn from someone with that kind of expertise, with a colleague that as passionate as you, and inside a facility where the only purpose is, to support you.
Second, it assists you to reach your dream job. No one can deny that to have a stable income or if you quite ambitious, 6 digits paycheck, you need a good job. A good job usually offered to the smartest, the most skillful, and the most competent people in your country. To compete with these folks, you need strong credentials. The guarantee for your ability is needed to persuade your employer. The diploma certificate from a prestigious university, usually gets the job done. Because it’s general knowledge that to attend a top university, you must be smart and if you graduate with honors from the same university, you must be superman.
Third, the lifelong friendship you’ll get. It is not secret that connection helps you to rule the world. A thousand friends are not enough, but one enemy is too much. All the wise quotes about friends and relationship stated that later in your life, you will need help. The university is the best place to find it. Either you search business comrade or spouses, the university will give you time and place to meet. The chance for you to be perfect for each other, are enormous since you both love the same thing in the first place.
In conclusion, despite all the troublesome, attending university will offer opportunities like no other. It will not warrant your future but it will give you foundation and skill to pursue something that you love. Human already proves by innovation and technology, we can make this world better and more sophisticated. The innovations that change the world usually started with a scholar who chases his/her dream.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, still, third, well, after all, in conclusion, kind of, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2612.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 539.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84601113173 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81833721656 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55279884037 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 284.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526901669759 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 819.0 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 11.0 3.08781362007 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6510340726 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.625 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.84375 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221362183565 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582942114561 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420709202484 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115526154309 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034617892108 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 86.8835125448 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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