People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences,
career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, more and more young people attend the universities for different reasons. According
to the survey, the main goal of what most of them do so is for career preparation.
There are many reasons to demonstrate it. The most primary reason is that is that university are
the most suitable spot to absorb knowledge, which mostly determines your career development.
With the development of the society, "knowledge is power" has been a rule: the more knowledge
one possesses, the more easily he succeeds in his career. For instance, it is often reported that
MBA graduates in famous universities, such as Harvard, will acquire high start payment when the
companies employ them for the first time. After several works, abundant working experience and
solid knowledge base will make them further develop in the manager class.
Another reason is that universities will provide one with not only knowledge but also many other
abilities, including communication ability, corporation ability, and independency ability etc, which
are beneficial to future career. At the same time, he can make friends with his schoolmates and
deals with all kinds of people, who often become his colleagues or business partner in the future.
Furthermore, in this way, his view will be widened and abilities will be improved. When he goes
off the campus, he always has stronger competition ability than those who do not go to the
universities.
Last but not the least one is that in contrast, history illustrates that people refused by the
universities have few opportunities to succeed in their career development. Because of their low
educational level, most companies would rather employ them as physical workers than mental
workers. in this way, the development of technology and science will fall them into disuse. Such
as in many manufacturing factories now, there are automatic machines as substitute for workers.
In a word, of many reasons for people to go to universities, career preparation has been the most
primary. When education background becomes more important in career development, it will
attract more people to do so for a long period.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'is that'.
Suggestion: is that
...demonstrate it. The most primary reason is that is that university are the most suitable spot ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
... physical workers than mental workers. in this way, the development of technology...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, for instance, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.375 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95344116196 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558139534884 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8766089918 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.764705882 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2352941176 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.53405017921 507% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207963316984 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741896305962 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684064541761 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635065731001 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749532187245 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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