People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is not shortage of debate about the motive of why someone would pursue a college or university degree. Without no question, many people would think that attending a college or a university would improve their career while other could be attractive by the new knowledge or experiences. As far as I am concerned, I deeply believe that the most strong motivation for someone to complete a higher degree is the need of improve his or her professional career. I think this way mainly for two reasons I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, a graduate student has better job offers and opportunities than an undergraduate one. Moreover, job opportunities has usually better salaries offers for professional with Master or PhD degrees than for professional with no degree at all. Consequently, better job opportunities with better payment offers is a big motivation for people to complete a higher education. To illustrate this idea I will expose my own experience. When I arrive to Canada ten years ago, I could only access to a very low income job. As soon as I certified my university degree with the University of Toronto I could apply to a better remunerative job, and also I could submit an application for a Master. I believe that when my graduate degree is completed, I would get a new and better quality job.
Secondly, a graduate degree brings higher prestige to the person graduated. A Master or a PhD could open doors that where closed before for a professional. For example, a person could improve his or her networking and professional contacts in his or her workplace or educational area. Therefore, his or her name could become a brand itself and get invited to conferences and presentation very well paid. Once again, the academic merit of a person is very important for the improvement of his or her career.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that most of the people attending a college or a university is looking for an achievement in their professional goals. I think this way because having a graduate degree means better job offers with better payment, and also because a graduate degree would bring a higher prestige to any professional.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'bettered', 'welled'.
Suggestion: bettered; welled
...Moreover, job opportunities has usually better salaries offers for professional with M...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9027027027 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98544802784 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459459459459 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6177851946 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.777777778 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213857481781 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732180527697 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810400963189 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150250558195 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0960840148114 0.0645574589148 149% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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