Undoubtedly, universities are the most important and essential institutions in every single country all over the world. There is the place where our future decision-makers study in for at least four years. There are many reasons that push individuals to attend higher education institutions. In my point of view, the most common reasons are to prepare for a career and to have a new experience.
Almost all young people go to university with career preparation as one of their primary reasons. We live in a competitive world, even a very simple or low position job might attract hundreds of candidates to apply for it. Of course, If you do not have an appropriate educational background, you will not have a good opportunity, or even, you might not get a job. For example, if a big restaurant offers a job for an accountant position. Surely, you must have an accountant certificate in order just to apply for this position. This applies to engineers, lawyers, teachers and so on. That is whey the rate of young people who go to college is increasing rapidly.
In addition to preparing for a career, students go to college in order to live new experiences. Every single day in campus life has a unique experience. Gathering together all information and skills that gain from these days, make it worthy to spend money and enroll in these institutions. To illustrate that idea let us consider the following example. I remember when I was studying civil engineering at Jordan University of Science and Technology, back here in Irbid, I joined the student union. It was a good learning opportunity for me and it allowed me to grow as a more mature person. Moreover, it opened the door for me to meet new different students from different majors and acquire valuable experiences that I had never known before. This allowed me to expand my social network and broaden my horizons. Therefore, such experiences can help me build a strong foundation for the future.
In sum, attending college or university became a vital part of each young's life these days. Not only to prepare for a future job but also to acquire wonderful experiences that make our life easier and more enjoyable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, at least, for example, in addition, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85483870968 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90238438623 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572580645161 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3509587052 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.0909090909 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86363636364 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288776249578 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741050781984 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592764651419 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162471260125 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302109066399 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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