People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
College or university is a very vital role in shaping and also in preparing an individual for the challenges he or she is going to encounter in his or her future. There are myriad of reasons why people attend college or university, it depends on their needs and requirements.
First and for most important reason why people attend colleges or university is because they want to inculcate basic knowledge about living, wax their knowledge or get some skills in the filed which they like. To illustrate that let's see an example, if an individual is interested in ballet and interested in learn more technical skills required to do flawless ballet dance, he or she need to get enrolled in a ballet school or college, so that he can learn aforementioned skills from trained person and can groom his skills.
Secondly, colleges or universities help an individual to open sulfeit door for career opportunities. Colleges or universities with no doubt have the best skilled teachers and mentors, who help students to pursue their goals and dreams. If an individual want to be an mechanical engineer and wants to work for Tesla or BMW -- the blue elephant company, he or she need to have very profound knowledge in that field like, how does an engine work or other mechanical related work, so that he or she can compete for jobs in such companies and can live their dreams.
In addition, parents also prefer schools and colleges for their children, as nowadays parent are busy in their work they cannot help children in inculcate solemn, so sending their children helps them to make sure their child is learning right and ethical practices and will in future he or she will become good citizen.
In sum, people have different reasons for sending their children to school, colleges or universities, albeit one main and common reason is to inculcate moral ethics in them and help them become better human. I personally think going to schools, colleges or universities will help us grow our mind, have a new experience, increase our knowledge and prepare ourself for better world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...and dreams. If an individual want to be an mechanical engineer and wants to work f...
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Line 7, column 238, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
...em to make sure their child is learning right and ethical practices and will in futur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, in addition, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 13.8261648746 231% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6692257808 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.1344086022 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.7694930888 48.9658058833 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.8 100.406767564 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.2 20.6045352989 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272476934156 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13967524991 0.076458572812 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864819733322 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171005854543 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083970748431 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 11.7677419355 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.0537634409 159% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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