Nobody doubts that our jobs have a great influence on our daily lives. Every week we spend lots of time and huge efforts in our careers. Some people argue that it is more enjoyable to have a work with only three days a week for long hours instead of a job with five days a week for shorter hours; others disagree. In my point of view, I believe that having a career with a smaller number of days and longer hours is much entertaining for two fundamental reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, three days a week at work open the door to you to experience lots of new things. By this type of work, you have a long weekend that allows you to travel, go climbing, and do many more activities that you cannot when you have a job with five days. To illustrate this idea let us consider the following example. I remember last year when my boss gave me two more days of relaxing from work at the end of the week. I traveled to Germany and lived a great learning opportunity that allowed me to meet new different people and gain valuable experiences that I had never known before. Moreover, it allowed me to expand my social network and broaden my horizons. I can imagine how it is a great idea to have the opportunity for these types of experiences every weekend by having this type of work.
Second, you can save lots of time and effort by having a three days job. Believe it or not, you may waste four hours every day on the road when you go and go back from your work. For instance, I remember when I was studying Civil Engineering at Jordan University of Science and Technology back her in Irbid. I was traying every semester to make my schedule two or three days instead of five days. I was living two hours away from my university, as a result of making my schedule with fewer days, I minimize the time that I might waste. In addition, I gave me the opportunity to concentrate on my homework and prepare well for my exams. This experience taught me that whenever you can have a career with fewer days, will be better for you.
In conclusion, as a human, we spend about a third of our lives at work. Therefore, we can imagine how important the type of work we on our lives. Having a fewer day of work will allow you to find time to experience new things and to minimize the time you waste and the effort you make on the road going to your work.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, third, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27433628319 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35332098635 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433628318584 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8461523679 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5238095238 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113607868566 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373645222639 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349750288083 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754436519988 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175103035107 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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