Today, textile industry has come far and evolved so mush that there are a plethora of choices to choose from. People wear all kinds of clothes from casual to traditional to formal. It is natural to question, if by wearing different clothes, we behave differently. I belive that clothes do not influence the way people behave.
Firstly, it is difficult to put up a pretence for a long time and under all circumstances. A police or a soldier in his uniform is suppose to be belligerent. Many times we have seen the acts of kindness by soldiers, who are away from their families and homes for long durations, when they have been captured in a photograph playing with puppies and kittens. People in police who have a soft corner for kids, cannot keep up a facade when they meet a child who looks at them with expectation of kindness. On the other hand the judge should be impartial in delivering justice, but can he keep up his behavior when his own son is inculpated? His clothes do not influence his love for his son. Thus when faced with certain circumstances, the innate nature of a person comes to surface. Police officers cannot put on the same behavior for each of the long hours they work.
Secondly, the society does not expect you to change your behavior when you adorn different clothes. People expect their friends to be who they are no matter what they wear. Infact, if someone dresses up neatly, and changes their behavior, it is sure to raise some eyebrows. An actress friend of mine, gets to wear the most fashionable clothes. However, this has not affected her personality in any way. She is still humble, ebullient and even clumsy at times, and this shows whenever she attends a talk show. In contrast, the model who I work with is stylish even is simple clothes. She maintains her posture and style in any clothes she wears. She carries her self with grace at all places she goes. Thus her clothes do not influence her idiosyncrasies in many ways. If my actress friend was not her usual self, if she pretende to be haughty and arrogant, many people close to her, who know her well, will not appretiate this. After all who likes a poseur.
Thus I believe that clothes do not influence the way one behaves. People cannot stray from their true self for a long time. We all would like to befriend people who are not pretentious, and do give so much importance to clothes so as to change their behavior with it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: SUPPOSE_TO[1]
Message: Probably you should use a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...A police or a soldier in his uniform is suppose to be belligerent. Many times we have s...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...A police or a soldier in his uniform is suppose to be belligerent. Many times we have s...
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Line 3, column 690, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... do not influence his love for his son. Thus when faced with certain circumstances, ...
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Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... sure to raise some eyebrows. An actress friend of mine, gets to wear the most fa...
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Line 5, column 703, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...self with grace at all places she goes. Thus her clothes do not influence her idiosy...
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Line 5, column 930, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...now her well, will not appretiate this. After all who likes a poseur. Thus I belie...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... this. After all who likes a poseur. Thus I believe that clothes do not influence...
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Line 7, column 229, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...d do give so much importance to clothes so as to change their behavior with it.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'well', 'after all', 'as to', 'in contrast', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.200408997955 0.229887763892 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.177914110429 0.158761421928 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0736196319018 0.0866891130778 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0593047034765 0.046263068375 128% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0961145194274 0.0685040099705 140% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0981595092025 0.118717715034 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0204498977505 0.0351676179071 58% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.48942190155 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0327198364008 0.0309702414327 106% => OK
Particles: 0.0081799591002 0.00188951952338 433% => OK
Determiners: 0.0777096114519 0.0887237588012 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0143149284254 0.0209618222197 68% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0306748466258 0.0139019557991 221% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2428.0 2387.08602151 102% => OK
No of words: 436.0 408.028673835 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56880733945 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.302752293578 0.338922669872 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.220183486239 0.251872472559 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.135321100917 0.174417080927 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0779816513761 0.112833075102 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48942190155 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532110091743 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 61.5360415684 59.2087087015 104% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6684587814 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.1481481481 20.5533526081 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8301742667 48.84282405 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9259259259 120.699889404 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1481481481 20.5533526081 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.592592592593 0.644075263715 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 38.166496772 45.7405998639 83% => OK
Elegance: 0.957055214724 1.45489161554 66% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301684348839 0.300154397459 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101445135995 0.103427244359 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0968370205131 0.0752933317313 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.392016695376 0.497263757937 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122474681467 0.151897553556 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100636389459 0.114077575197 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100515697575 0.0781384742642 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.242315219991 0.336927656856 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0467937934932 0.067059652881 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231376033309 0.210909579961 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097760684897 0.0618886996521 158% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.