People in communities can make decisions that protect and improve the natural environment. Which one of the following three actions is most useful for people to do if they want to help the environment in their local community? Explain why? Increase access to public transportation (for example, buses or trains) to reduce the number of automobiles on local roads Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
when communities consider to organize their financial plan about how to improve natural environment, many aspects will be talked about. Like increasing the number of trees and creating parks, stopping providing plastic bags during shopping, or proving public transportation. however, when it comes to which aspects is most crucial, I think public transportation is the most useful action to protect environment.
Nowadays, the natural environment really suffers a lot from air pollution. On no account can we ignore the fact that more and more private cars should take the responsibility of air pollution due to the over-emission of carbon dioxide. however, people need transportation to get access to their work places and come back home. therefore, in the way that increasing access to public transportation, the number of private cars will decrease undoubtedly. take my hometown as an example, Last year we developed subway as a new kind of public transportation. Impressed by its convenience and speed, more and more citizens chose subway to go outside. after one year subway was developed, the air condition really turns better now.
What’s more, the other ways might not actually work. it is acknowledged that the public places have been planed for several years, therefore the places for adding trees and parks are really limited.
Also, the restriction on plastic bags couldn’t work as well. Because the people who really want to use plastic bags will buy it instead. According to a research conducted by local government, after the law which prohibits supermarkets provide plastic bags to customers was published, the use of plastic bags didn’t decrease apparently. now that customers couldn’t get free plastic bags, they turned to buy them, and the supermarkets put more plastic bags on their shops to meet the needs of customers. With this circulation, the restriction can’t work as it was expected.
To put all things into nutshell, the other two actions have their advantages, but I think the most useful way to improve environment is increasing access to public transportation, people will go out in a convenient and environmentally friendly way.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37101449275 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10195851163 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5036363438 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.944444444 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215472487354 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606629869042 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614433927403 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118720216935 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677992813727 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.