People do many different things to stay healthy What do you do for good health Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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People do many different things to stay healthy. What do you do for good health? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In the modern world there is a tendency to care of your health. People are becoming more interested in their mental and physical health. There are many thing people do to be healthier. Personally, I have got some things which help me to be in good health.

First of all, I believe that sport must be an essential part of every person’s lifestyle. Different sport activities like yoga, running or swimming allow us be fit and in good physical shape. There is no doubt that the lack of sport in our life may lead to problems with our health that in the future can be the reason of serious diseases. As for me, I really like swimming in the pool in the evenings. I think that it helped me to cure my hurt knee. Before swimming I could hardly run fast, but now I do not feel that my knee restricts me doing this.

Also, I would like to add that eating healthy food as doing sport is a great way to be healthy. People often do not think about what they it, because they do not have a lot of free time for this. At work and at school people usually have snacks eating junk food. Fast food is also popular nowadays. But if you want to take of your health, you really need to think about the idea to refuse such a kind of food. I do not like eating fast food, because it hurts my health and advise all my friends to follow my lifestyle.

Moreover, I believe than to stay happy and healthy we need to take care of our mental health. In our stressful world people often are under pressure at work or at school. Sometimes negative situations and problems may influence on our inner balance. When a person is out of his mood or mental health, he feels tiredness and passiveness. That’s why it is quite important for me to avoid any stressful situations or, at least, to try to overcome them. To do this I prefer walking in the fresh. Just one hour out of four walls of my house helps me to focus on only important things and to get rid of negative thoughts.

Thus, people choose themselves what steps they do to stay healthy. As for me, I found some beneficial things for me: sport, health food and avoiding stress.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, really, so, thus, as for, at least, i think, kind of, no doubt, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33333333333 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32230906426 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521303258145 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7761087539 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.16 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.96 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311563082188 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876529336143 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865954180861 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195650175612 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724034764445 0.0645574589148 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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