Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Nowadays people have variety of resources from which they can extract any kind of information: TV, newspapers, radio, and the Internet. The mass media provides information momently on every event which has just happened in the world. Though most people try to devour every emerging news to say informative, I do not support this approach and think that it is better to say away from news about everything happening in the world.
Starting from the crucial point that our modern world contains too much information and data to keep in memory; there is no sense to know everything about anything. Everyone has his phone with the access to the Internet, and if this person needs to find news about something, he will make it easy with his smartphone. At the same time, I believe a person should use up his memory rationally for bringing advantages to the society he lives in. How can he do this? By doing his work and being a good specialist. That’s why it is better to know more in one’s professional field rather than lay news about everything.
To continue the topic of the great amount of information, there is an idea to provide. The process of consuming any type of information requires time. Though, some people may say that we can read news on our way home or to work spot, I think we can devote this time to something better. For example, we can spend this time on learning new languages, developing new skills and etc. It will be better for self-development that reading news which do not affect your life and will be forgotten soon. For example, I prefer learning French when I am going to my university. Though, I have noticed that the man, who is on the same bus, reads articles from a local newspaper. I do not think that the most part of information in there will be interesting for him.
Moreover, there is no point in relying on news which people see or hear, because even the name of a famous TV channel or a newspaper does not guarantee that news is true. There is a high percent of reading wrong-presented news and forming narrow-minded point of view about events in the world. People need to understand that not all that was printed or written present the truth that they should know how to filter news. Forgetting to do this, they can form a wrong perception of life around. For example, the accident about the fire in the forest near my city was presented in a worse light to hide the real culprits, but all people who read the newspaper believed that news.
To sum up, I disagree that people should know about every event happening around the world, because it will not help them to evolve professionally as well as can be harmful for people’ development.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'provide'.
Suggestion: provide
...radio, and the Internet. The mass media provides information momently on every event whi...
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Line 5, column 374, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...ng new languages, developing new skills and etc. It will be better for self-development ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, i think, kind of, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2227.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 479.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64926931106 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65393493267 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517745302714 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.42273089 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8260869565 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8260869565 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73913043478 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202052612936 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585749977705 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570566379727 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124914173924 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393077574837 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.