People have a lot of opinions about the value of advanced education. Which do you think is the most important reason to attend college or university?
new experiences
career preparation
increased knowledge
Use specific details and examples in your answer.
In today’s life, higher education is significant matter for most people’s life. Individuals decide to study in the educational organizations for various types of reasons. Personally, I believe that career preparation is the essential cause of enrolling classes of postsecondary education. I have three rationales for holding this opinion, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, nearly all satisfactory job positions require workers to have at least the qualification of undergraduate university. Most youngsters are aware of this and they are willing to study academic disciplines in order to have the profession they want. Otherwise, most young people who have no university degree will probably end up laboring for their entire life, which is probably unpleasant for them. For instance, last year, I wanted to get a programmer in the well-known company, which requires graduate school’s qualification. Therefore, I started studying in the university in order to have possession I am willing to achieve.
Secondly, students in the educational organizations are required to attend classes from different fields of study, thus they will have basic knowledge about disciplines. Therefore, they will be probably get aware of what type of career will be the most suitable for their interest and potential while taking introductory courses. My companion’s experience is a compelling example of this. Last year, he told me that he will become mathematician, which actually worried me a lot. I thought this profession was inappropriate for him because he was good at other subjects such as physics and psychology but not mathematics. Afterwards, he enrolled classes of mathematics and psychology in accordance with the ordinance of his university. Eventually, he ends up recognizing that he will be far more successful if he gets a psychologist rather than mathematician. If he had not attended these classes in the university, he would have chosen improper profession.
Finally, some universities and colleges have network with companies, which helps students to get a career easily as soon as they procure the degree. This agreement between institutions provide the fine opportunity for people to get possession. On the other hand, this chance will be inaccessible for people who do not study at any educational organization. For example, my brother had been studying at “National University of Mongolia” until the Mongolian most well-known mining company invited him to work at their firm in accordance with the deal between his university and the company. Thereby, he was employed without even seeking for job. By contrast of my brother’s history, his friends who did not study at college could not be included in this specific program.
In summation, I am of the opinion of that the most reasonable and obvious rationale of attending courses at postsecondary educational organization is to have the chance of getting terrific job. This is because most employers require the diploma from employees, people will be available to decide which job is apt for them, and individuals can take advantage on particular programs provided by universities and colleges.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, at least, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2719.0 1977.66487455 137% => OK
No of words: 500.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.438 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72870804502 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21078868816 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 865.8 618.680645161 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6910242498 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.76 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.32 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179430172182 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552460046519 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390541103162 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114397565237 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217274054697 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 86.8835125448 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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