People learn things better from those at their own level such as fellow students or co-worker than from those at a higher level such as teacher
Teacher vs Co-worker or fellow students
The debate between whether people learn more from a teacher or their fellow students/co-worker is very controversial to support one side completely. For the better examination, a constructive and destructive facets of this issue should be consider thoroughly. Some may hold a view that a teacher is best mediator to give knowledge as teacher are well acquainted to express their knowledge; plus, people eager to learn from them with well discipline. however, I strongly believe that co-worker or fellow students are more effective to impart knowledge on people.
The first exquisite point to be included is that co-worker are more easy to approach when something to learn. teacher may have hectic schedule and unable to give as require time for students to clear out their every doubt. similarly, people may find hesitation to ask something as they are more unfamiliar to student where they ask anything which bother them; since it is important to clear out doubt to learn something more comprehensively, co-worker or fellow student is easy to approach. Unlike teacher, they spend most of the time with fellow students where they ask any question where time may not be limited. again, with more known to them than teacher, there will be no awkward and fear between them; and surely, it is essential to facilitate better learning process. I want to explain my own experience to shed this context. during high school, my friends, were prime one , where I learned most of my doubted question. I used to be shy and my hesitation kept me to learn freely from teacher. Even out my comfort zone, I once asked couple questions to my teacher, they were unable to address my query and it further put me back to learn something. Thankfully, my friend helped me a lot to gain knowledge. explaining every single details about my query, they literally means more than my teacher.
Moreover, a co-worker and fellow students may introduce more extra knowledge to the person. they is no bound for them to learn something and elucidate it more extensively. While, teacher are more stick to the conventional idea and hardly clear out the doubts which belongs to new idea or outside from a set course. For instance, me and my friends once were looking for the extensive model of aerospacing engineering. we asked plenty of the question during our query session however, the teacher failed to explain any of those. In addition, he evaded the question by saying that it belongs out of the sylabus. But, my friend who was fanatic in this field explains all the issue with clearing all aspects of our query.
To wrap up, contempalting all aforementioned reasons, once can realize how easiness with our co-worker and fellow student help us to learn more in detail than our teacher.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...acher or their fellow students/co-worker is very controversial to support one sid...
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Line 1, column 241, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'considered'?
Suggestion: considered
...tructive facets of this issue should be consider thoroughly. Some may hold a view that a...
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Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'holds'.
Suggestion: holds
...should be consider thoroughly. Some may hold a view that a teacher is best mediator ...
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Line 1, column 298, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...ly. Some may hold a view that a teacher is best mediator to give knowledge as teacher a...
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Suggestion: However
...o learn from them with well discipline. however, I strongly believe that co-worker or f...
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Suggestion: Teacher
...sy to approach when something to learn. teacher may have hectic schedule and unable to ...
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Suggestion: Similarly
...tudents to clear out their every doubt. similarly, people may find hesitation to ask some...
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Suggestion: Again
...question where time may not be limited. again, with more known to them than teacher, ...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to process'
Suggestion: to process
...essential to facilitate better learning process. I want to explain my own experience to...
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Suggestion: During
...my own experience to shed this context. during high school, my friends, were prime one...
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Suggestion: ,
... high school, my friends, were prime one , where I learned most of my doubted ques...
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Suggestion: Explaining
...iend helped me a lot to gain knowledge. explaining every single details about my query, th...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'mean'
Suggestion: mean
... details about my query, they literally means more than my teacher. More...
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...rally means more than my teacher. Moreover, a co-worker and fellow student...
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Suggestion: They
...uce more extra knowledge to the person. they is no bound for them to learn something...
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Message: Use third-person plural verb with 'they': 'are', 'were'.
Suggestion: are; were
...ore extra knowledge to the person. they is no bound for them to learn something an...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...ore extra knowledge to the person. they is no bound for them to learn something an...
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Suggestion: We
...nsive model of aerospacing engineering. we asked plenty of the question during our...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, look, may, moreover, similarly, so, well, while, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2323.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98497854077 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74195977881 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6279973012 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2608695652 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13043478261 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283772633714 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911645949501 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837319170044 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212792469153 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707062365631 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.