It is easy for family member in present than past
family is always play important factor in success of people. Some believe that people were more successful in the past life while other think that people in modern life more successful. I believe that family is more important and effective in today's life and makes easier for the member of the family to be sucessful; I am going to develop my reasons in next paragraphs.
First of all, people or family nowadays very much supportive due to develop cognizant. Pshycological knowledge is very prevalent in the social life. Everybody want to respect and try to understand view-point of the family member even if it is strange. With no fear, family member have privilege to say their thought and this help them to illustrate their feelings and more pressure free to act on their goal. but, the things was different in the past; they were bounded with the superstitious custom and tradition. let me tell you my personal story about my father what he wanted to be but what he ended up to. my grand father was very strict and not gave a damn about the others feeling. my fathers always want to be painter but at that time his opinion was feckless on to his family especially grand pa. due to my grand pa adamant and inflexible view about the career, he refused to give sake about my father interest. Consequently, he was ended up what he wanted to be his son. Had the things would be different if he had born in this generation where people care about the others opinion. he may be more successful if he was let to pursue his dream. Thus, flexible conscience in family member makes people life more successful today's than previous.
Secondly, high-tech development helps family member to get better access and platform to be successful in their life. modern technology enables the people to get the tool/facility what they want to push their career in the apex point. The same technological innovation may be major drawback in the past to be successful in their life. On the above paragraph I have mentioned that my father wanted to be a painter in his life but ended up with other profession. may be this happened with my grand pa stubborn nature in his view. but, if my father had have a chance to pursue his skills with the technological advancement, he may would pursue his career what he interested in. However, with lack of technology and my grand pa view, he could not get over and stepped up to raise hand to do his things. With respect to past life, I can changed my father's mind to see what I see and do what I fascinated with even my parents support. In this way, technology development blessed this generation to be more successful.
In conclusion, family member in this generation are blessed with both technology and widen view of the society. people are free to experiment things and have better chance to be successful due to this privilege.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, in conclusion, first of all, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 84.0 52.1666666667 161% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2367.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 505.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68712871287 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62524225032 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.421782178218 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 745.2 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9646339323 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6666666667 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7037037037 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127575401121 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446687611117 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583790460718 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101538458927 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450074007024 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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