which education do you prefer, online or by attending school?
In the world of technological advancement, education approach more flexible with current need. education can get through by different process without following traditional pattern. Despite this progress, I, personally, prefer a traditional approach for education. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explain in following paragraphs.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that traditional teaching process is more effective in learning because people have to follow certain rule to follow in the univeristy. rules force to draw the best from the student as a result, learning becomes speedy. On the other hand, online study though have easy procedure unlike traditional approach however, student may delay to learn under it. this is due to no body to handle their negligence and habit of procastination. In my personal experience, after enrolling in both study type, I had found traditional approach is much more effectiver in learning. The couse, which I took online, was convenient to approach but. I misused this previlege . Consequently, I had failed in the subject. however, in traditional classroom approach my entire school life was upto was incredible; And these time, I was more good at the grade. so traditonal approach indeed adopt rigorous approach but have positive impact on the eduaction.
Secondly, traditional education is must for most of the practical education. it is true that online education can be learned from the online. however, for the practical purpose, presence of the person is essential as there is no sufficiency of the instrument at their home. Furthermore, sometimes, it might require even more sophisticated intrument which impossible to gain in home environment. For instance, my field of education is in engineering; some course of it, I had fulfilling with from online but, I had to attend intrumental measuring to learn it practically. so it does not matter how efficent technology will be developed, the requirement of this method still remain essential in learning.
In conclusion, although online course have been convenient but still have void which only filled by the traditional settings. One can depend on online for easiness however for the better education and for maintaing discipline within ourselves, traditional education needed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45277777778 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06867950698 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3915762694 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2272727273 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16445489466 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452380357851 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452227596241 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112193434603 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431063204998 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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