Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
public figure has very influential in the society development as they are in reach of the public. what they do become headline of the new. Mainly youngster idolizes the artist and celebrity in their life. so i agree that public figure have more influence in the young's mind. In following paragraph, I will develop my point of views why I feel this way.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that young people follows a lot of televison show, songs and movie. Unknowingly, the impact and the character of the program have imprinted in their mind. In fact, they idolize and adulate the artist of their show and follow whatever they do. A vivid example that shed the light in this is that during my childhood I admired the work of Micheal zackson. whatever he did and had opinion would be mine. Once, he said that men should be fashionable, so I cut my hear to be more stylistic. But when I got home I beat up by my mother because it was very ridiculous. Thus, young people are eager to do imitate their idol, their opinion does matter.
On the other hand, when I was old enough, I barely give look to the celebrities opinion. In contrast to young age, I have become more mature and can decide what is wrong or right. Since, the opinion of the celebrity seems no matter to me as I will rarelr shape my opinion as their now.
Another reasons which deserve some words to say is that young people have less knowledge and experinnce unlike the mature one. they may see the world as other important person look. However, the mature one has developed cogizant in any area and have own view point before they look others opinion. As a result, they are less likely manipulated by the artist.
In conclusion, young people may rarely have opinion on somethings so they may shape their opinion with their favorate one, while mature well well aware about which to follow.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, so, thus, well, while, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, as a result, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.646884273 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34431130774 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551928783383 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5078297769 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5714285714 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0476190476 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157659226726 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477131167128 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330779318653 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913876256622 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176239463749 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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