People should invest their money in taking care of pets or should utilize in better way?
Money play vital role in every folk lives. It is a basic need of life. The use of money is depend upon the people that how they spend it. Some people prefer to do shopping, outing, and some spend in vacations and other over their pets. So, the use of money is alays debated by many people. Some of them agree with the statement, other would disagree. I certainly agree that people should exploit their money in correct or better way so that the can get benefit.
First, people can save their precious time and money. They can invest their money in business rather than in taking care of pets. This in turn, give them benefit and secure their future. If there is pet in home, children use to play with them and waste their time. For instance, my friend's daughter always play with little puppy and during her exam, she never concentrate on her studies. Basically. This puppy divert her concentration and deceiving her from studies. Ultimately, she failed in exams and waste her year. When her parent realize that sI tuition, they avoid pets in their house so, that their children study well and make their career bright and successfull.
Second, another better utilization of that maoney, is giving in charity. It will assist poor peoplease to get free education so that they can do something better for their own future and also for their country. It is the better use of extra money. Furthermore, people can fund that money in hospitals because there are many patients in hospital who need money. For instance I recently read a news about a girl, who need double lung transplant. Hospital show their estimates in thousands. But, the parents of a little girl could not afford that money so they appeal and request on some social media. By that way, many people helped them and they still need more money. It is one of the better and striking use of money.
To sum it up, people should not waste their money. They may need it all the time. People shoud exploit it in correct way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'plays'.
Suggestion: plays
Money play vital role in every folk lives. It is a...
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Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...basic need of life. The use of money is depend upon the people that how they spend it....
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Line 2, column 222, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ture. If there is pet in home, children use to play with them and waste their time....
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Line 2, column 361, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'concentrates'.
Suggestion: concentrates
...le puppy and during her exam, she never concentrate on her studies. Basically. This puppy d...
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Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...eed money. For instance I recently read a news about a girl, who need double lung tran...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, still, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60169491525 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17736514092 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519774011299 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7126576392 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.3333333333 100.406767564 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1111111111 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85185185185 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37246643489 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098761487133 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948096373399 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230340289811 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387790722785 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 11.7677419355 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.51 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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