People should never make an important decision alone
Making an important decision is hardly easy for anyone as this will have huge impact on that person's future. However, when it comes to make such a decision, methods vary. Some people prefer to do this alone while other would consult for other opinions before coming to conclusion. To my view, a crucial decision should never be made on one's own.
First of all, people who are about to arrive at a big decision is usually not in their best condition to make wise judgment. As people are aware of the profound effect of their choice, they are often put under high pressure and as a result, may not be able to think. On the other hand, people outside that situation will see a bigger picture and give good advice to the decision-maker. An illustration is when I have to choose which college to apply when I was at high school. I can usually maintain my composure but this is such an important decision to my whole life that I was under a lot of stress and could not think straight. My sister actually helped me to calm down and logically evaluate competitiveness of my profile, my interest and potential universities. Thanks to her, I was able to focus on the core of matter and make in-depth and thorough analysis and reach the right decision
Furthermore, consultation from others would foster the decision-making process and the result would be usually better. Advice from people who have related knowledge and experience would obviously provide the decision maker with helpful information to make a wiser choice. Moreover, asking other people would allow one to see the situation from different perspectives. Therefore, he or she can make better judgment and reach better decision. For instance, my selection of college was the result of consulting from different people. My sister told me her experience in her technology college. My uncle, who was head of human resources department of a company gave me basic ideas about the labor market at present as well as trend in the future. My cousins who already had graduated and had a job at the time show me the reality of working in the fields. After talking to them, I feel better informed and more confident with my choice of college and major.
In conclusion, I believe that people should make major decision after consultation from others instead of doing it on their own. Key decision would exert enormous influence on people's life, therefore people should be careful when making them by consulting other people around
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2060.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83568075117 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65046656255 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532863849765 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6183393206 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0952380952 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7619047619 5.45110844103 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334268921054 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940612627395 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852246020465 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239007285402 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978693821303 0.0645574589148 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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