People should not buy the foreign products instead they should purchase the products of their own country.
Agree or disagree?
This is era of modernization due to development in world, people have various choices for purchase items of any country. Online shopping assist to consumers to buy what they want. There is no shortage of debate whether people purchase foreign products and own country products. From my vantage point, people should buy the own country product rather than buying foreign products. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in following essay.
First of all, as based on our knowledge, purchase own country items leads to bolster the country economy as well as items become famous national and international level. Increase products purchaser helps to widespread the knowledge of the items in world. So, foreigners also allure our national products and buy it. It is directly benefits to our country. For example, If one foreigner has great experience about our country products so, he sent message to his friends, and his friends say to other friend. So, gradually products are famous and all people buy it. Increase the demands of product then, surging the production by producers. Eventually, competition occurs and product prices decrease and help to people to purchase lower rate products. Every manufacturing company needs employee so it would increase employment. This ways increase commercialization, to improve economic status of country.
Secondly, save money is another advantage to the consumers who buy own country products. For instance, last year, I purchased t-shirt in local market only 200 rupees and next day, I seen same t-shirt on the international company mall, it price 500 rupees. Some brand company misuse the brand name. Same material uses on both country but they take money from the customer for brand name. Accordingly, I think that purchase own country products is cheaper and save our money. Moreover, some time wasting of money to purchasing foreign products. My own experience compelling this, one year ago, I wanted head phone and I seen head phone which is made in china, it was cheaper so, I purchased it. When, I came home, I started to listening song; suddenly music voice was blurring and stopped to music played. I tried to use many time but it was not started. For this reasons, I believe that buying own country product because of quality of the products standard and more efficient.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that people should purchase national product rather than buying international products. This is because consumers save money and get the good quality of products, and support the country economy and commercialization.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'prices'?
Suggestion: prices
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2172.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15914489311 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75557374752 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520190023753 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1699615423 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4444444444 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5925925926 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354868669716 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105898532961 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979341505066 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242119181325 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073792129386 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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