PEOPLE TODAY SPEND TOO MUCH TIME ON PERSONAL ENJOYMENT DOING THINGS THEY LIKE TO DO RATHER THEN DOING THINGS THEY SHOULD DO?
Life is a beautiful journey and is a composition of all type of moments including leisure, struggle, laughter's, tears and a lot more. Everyone should spend life in a way that they do the right things and still enjoy their lives too. I agree with today's topic that these days people spend almost all time in enjoyment rather than spending time with family.
The first and foremost example is worshiping your God. It hardly takes few minutes of our day but we are so much busy in making ourselves happy that we forget or ignore the thing that will make our eternal life better. Secondly, family is the fundamental support any person have in his life but in today's time we spend so much time on social media, cell phones that we do not sit with our parents to say few words, do not spend any quality time with spouse or children because we have put forward our own personal happiness over all these precious relations.
Thirdly, if I take the example of kids these days , they have their own life, personal cell phone, iPods etc they do not know how to talk, how to move in society but all they know is technology, games, movies n stuff that makes them happy without thinking about their parents, their future n success, their studies and their life.
Thus, to conclude I agree that in the struggle of achieving an individual happiness we are losing the true meaning of pleasure and peace. If everybody do the right thing on right time then rather than individual entire family will be happy and in the long the entire nation and the whole world will turn into a happy place which it is meant to be.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 291.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50171821306 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19939815033 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563573883162 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.5185991932 48.9658058833 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.555555556 100.406767564 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3333333333 20.6045352989 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323536075096 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122831954945 0.076458572812 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12309816863 0.0737576698707 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188873407927 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791044809075 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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