The people we work with have many different characteristics and all of them affect the quality of our time at work. Of the following, what do you think is the most important quality for a boss or supervisor to have?
a serious attitude about their work
a lot of related experience
a tendency to always tell the truth
You may choose more than one. Use specific details and examples in your answer.
Work is a critical part of our life. Almost most of us have some colleagues in workplace whom we have close contact daily. It is inevitable that character of coworkers effect each other's bahaviors. While some people may like work with people who are well-experienced, honest, or serious person, I feel that having an experienced colleague who has a serious attitude about work is a valuable chance. In the following essay, I will elaborate on my reasons.
First, well-experienced peers who are helpful in office are real gems. Everyday in work, there is something new because of the high pace of condition change, hence, colleagues who have a bunch of expereience not only could help others to deal with these new circumstance but also could mentally assist their fellows to be calm and collected. To put this in perspective, in pharmacy where I work, everyday we see a new prescription with different condition which the doctors put a new medication on it. For some of junior pharmacists it is not a convenient situation, handling the new prescription because of the unusual situation after this COVID-19 pandemic, through which we have some shortage and national back order. I see how easy some of my senior colleagus deal with these prescription. It is not relevant to knowledge, in contrast, it comes from experience that they are able to communicate in a way to convince doctors to change their mind. Were experienced pharmacist not in our pharmacy, we would have a lot of chalenges everyday.
Second, a serious attitiude toward work make a productive environment which ends up having the best yield in work. Discipline is one of the thumb role of many of successful manager and staffs. Doing the right task at the right moment is a basic role of achieving goals in all projects, which needs a serious attitude and a restrict plan. For example, I used to work in a pharmaceutical company in which we made some new protein-based medications. This process included many steps through which we should follow the instruction preciesly in order to make a reasonable yield. A comprehensive attention needed to do all meseaurments. It was not possible without a serious attitude about work in all employees who work in that company. Thanks to the manager attitude who was able to cultivate such a disciplined environemnt in company which led to make the best products in the world.
All in all, I strongly believe that a well-experienced colleague is a gem because they could solve any problem in worlpalce in an easy way. In addition, having a serious attitude is nessecary to accompolish jobs that are very sensitive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, second, so, well, while, for example, i feel, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2185.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94343891403 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03594704634 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5483775918 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3181818182 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333025422854 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918625032285 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739325117538 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195814903151 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770981926956 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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