People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work?

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People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work?

Since the dawn of civilization, human beings have been putting all of their efforts so as to find a suitable job guaranteeing their future life; hence, taking the available alternative into account would be almost a rational task. In fact, as far as I am concerned, in addition to gaining a hoard of money by career there are many reasons which people work in order to reach pinnacle of their life. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.

To commence, vast majorities of people prefer to be successful in their life and develop in personal life day in day out. A persons work can provide an opportunity to learn and grow not only intellectually also socially. Indeed, it’s a means of attaining new goals in life by improving new skills and learning new things. By and large, it is established beyond doubt that work allows people to reach their fullest potential. Your work can grow and reach your potential.

Secondly, security is of the most significant items when it comes to purpose of working. People all around the globe look for security in their occupations. Actually, we need to know that when tomorrow comes, there will be work for us so that money may be earned. As a matter of fact, a plethora of people want stability in their lives in order to make realistic and effective plans for the future. As a corollary, your work can provide you with this security.

Last, but not least, is happiness with one's work. For example, Thomas Edison, the great inventor, was once encouraged by his wife to take a vacation. He responded by stating that he "could not think of anything he would rather do that work in his laboratory". Most people, who choose their occupations wisely, thoroughly enjoy their work. This contributes to their overall happiness.

To wrap it up, people all around the world work in order to flourish in their everyday lives. Contemplating all the aforementioned reason one soon realize that vast majorities of people work in order to develop their personal life and reach their goals by improving new skills. In addition, people want to ensure their future life and generation by making plans through their work. Finally, not only do people think about make a living and gaining a hoard of money but also do they think about overall happiness in their lives.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'to'
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'finally', 'hence', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'as to', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'as a matter of fact', 'by and large']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.223684210526 0.229887763892 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.157894736842 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0789473684211 0.0866891130778 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0570175438596 0.046263068375 123% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0745614035088 0.0685040099705 109% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131578947368 0.118717715034 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0372807017544 0.0351676179071 106% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71159431885 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0350877192982 0.0309702414327 113% => OK
Particles: 0.00219298245614 0.00188951952338 116% => OK
Determiners: 0.0635964912281 0.0887237588012 72% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0197368421053 0.0209618222197 94% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00877192982456 0.0139019557991 63% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2345.0 2387.08602151 98% => OK
No of words: 400.0 408.028673835 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8625 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.3175 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.23 0.251872472559 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.165 0.174417080927 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1175 0.112833075102 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71159431885 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 56.2550147572 59.2087087015 95% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.1818181818 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1527481019 48.84282405 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.590909091 120.699889404 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.772727272727 0.644075263715 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 41.1818181818 45.7405998639 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.35606060606 1.45489161554 93% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249688799899 0.300154397459 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0886174340054 0.103427244359 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0659533891453 0.0752933317313 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.479962867234 0.497263757937 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.116896571311 0.151897553556 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960207898538 0.114077575197 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059496878876 0.0781384742642 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.275240860726 0.336927656856 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0350054307071 0.067059652881 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170989850455 0.210909579961 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271797329828 0.0618886996521 44% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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