A person should never make an important decision alone.
Decisions made on an important issue can sometimes prone to a turning point in our lives. While some people prefer taking important decisions alone, a vast majority of people believe such decisions must be made in consultation with others. I personally think to seek help from others to make important decisions because of three main rationales that I can elaborate upon hereunder.
To begin with, very often, many of us may not have the required knowledge or experience in some areas where we are supposed to make decisions. This is where people with the required expertise in the concerned area come to play. These people would be able to share their knowledge and experience acquired to guide us for taking appropriate decisions. Seeking various opinions is much common in medical fields. My classmate's life is a compelling example of this situation. She was diagnosed with colorectal cancer from a famous hospital. She and her parents were devastated due to the results and the doctor suggested her start chemotherapies as early as possible. Nevertheless, a lot of her other relatives insisted them to consult another doctor and hospital for confirming the diagnosis. They accepted their opinions and did the same and cumulatively those doctors suggested that this cancer is curable with oral medications with no need for chemotherapy. Thus, a collaborative decision saved my friend from the side effects of chemotherapy, money, and her life.
Next, seeking help from others to solve issues is better than solving alone. Sometimes if we have any problem with anybody, a third individual who can hear both views and can suggest a decision, is much easier and valuable. To illustrate, this is common in school children when teachers interrupt in their fights. A teacher can hear both views and can solve the problem successfully. This is highly advantageous to either group.
Finally, if we make a decision alone we cannot blame others, moreover, we alone will be responsible for the situation. If a mother took a decision relating to her child, she alone will be responsible for any malpractice by her child. In contrast, if parents took decisions together the blame is shared and they can support each other.
However, if an individual takes a decision by themselves have some benefits. Too many different opinions can blur or interrupt a good decision-making process.
In the big picture, I still think that a person should never make important decisions alone due to the above-mentioned facts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, third, thus, while, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2104.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14425427873 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90976350527 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550122249389 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8208256633 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6666666667 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0416666667 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274076492394 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696904072979 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110641246141 0.0737576698707 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190563970615 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163924966266 0.0645574589148 254% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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