A person should never make an important decision alone
There is no denial to the fact that different people would have different opinions onmaking important decisions. Well, if I were to present my view in this regard, I would definitely speak in favour of not making important decisions alone. My point of view on this topic is influenced by a few personal experiences which I shall elucidate in the following paragraphs.
To start with, I must say that people are often carried away by emotions and sentiments. Taking a decision based on an absolute prespective can prove to be detrimental in future. Drawing from my past experience, I must say that I had suffered tremendously by such an act. When I passed out of high school, I was elated with my grades in mathematics. Although I did not enjoy the subject much, I was carried infatuated by the grades that I had earned and decided to take it up as my majors subject. Had I discussed the matter with some of my friends or parents, I would not have ended up wasting a year of my life, only to drop out from the course and select something which I genuinely enjoyed.
Secondly, important decisions taken in the heat of a moment can exacerbate situations by manifold times. I was a high school gymnast and did great in my sporting days. However, it once turned out that I decided to practice and develop on a highly dangerous- 'Produnova Vault' after missing narrowly on the gold medal to sameone who performed the same stunt. I did not consult my coach and ended up throwing away my career trying to excel at something which was out of my domain. It is, thus, important to realize that decisions taken in a rush without proper consultation turn out to be of no good.
Finally, I would like to state that decisions taken after discussion with acquaintances and well wishers involve a great deal of experience and neutral perception of persons from different walks of life. Be it chosing my graduate school or decising on my dissertation thesis, a healthy discussion with my peers have always ameliorated the situation in no time.
In conclusion, I would like to state that involving indivudals as per d\their domains for an unbiased perspective on any decision can turn out to be fruitful most of the times.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...prespective can prove to be detrimental in future. Drawing from my past experience, I mus...
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Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
... detrimental in future. Drawing from my past experience, I must say that I had suffered tremend...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70618556701 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79009814841 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533505154639 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6805282594 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.411764706 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8235294118 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138112138197 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505813372256 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514699777117 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864411431734 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323917799411 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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