A person should never make an important decision alone. Do you agree or dis agree with this statement? Use specific example and detail in your answer.
Decision making is difficult task. It is thought process of selecting a correct choice from the available options. When any individuals want to make good decision he/she should weight pros and corn of the all options to make better decision which is possible if they take help from other, than make decision. I strongly agree with the statement that person should never make an important decision alone. I will elaborate my reasons in the ensuing paragraphs.
First, different people have different opinions. In order to make the right choice people should discuss every possible decision and its consequences. Making an important decision alone can bring many negative results. For example, a person takes any decision for his family and he does not discuss with his family members. In this case, person can face many consequences of that decision which might affect many people in the future. I think that a good and wise decision can be taken only after discussion because people can share their knowledge and experiences and even look at the problem from different sides and aspects
Second, if a group leader makes the decision, sharing of information can help the leader choose more wisely. For example, A manager might not be aware of all the different considerations that could affect a complicated business decision; by including several people in the process, managers can form a well-rounded view of a problem that can lead to a good decision.
Lastly, Group decision making can allow to generate more ideas and facilitate greater creativity in problem solving. It is difficult for a single person to approach a problem from many different angles and to generate numerous good ideas. With group decision making, person can share ideas off one another and take advantage of differences in knowledge and perspectives to come up with more possible solutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, look, second, so, well, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13770491803 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66009357414 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524590163934 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.9951950392 48.9658058833 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.466666667 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21413532406 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953382955284 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136661800544 0.0737576698707 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135367845054 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103312762969 0.0645574589148 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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