A person who keeps his room clean and organized will be successful in life also, do you agree or disagree support with relevant examples.
A person who keeps his room clean and organised displays planning and organising skills. There's no denying that having these virtues makes one's road to success less difficult. Yet, these are not the only qualities required. There are more significant characteristics one should possess to achieve success. Hence, I beg to disagree with the statement in the question. In what follows, I will note down a few points that can help explain the reasons behind my stand.
To begin with, resilience and determination keep a person mentally steady in the longest race to success. Let's take the example of a man who lost eight elections, failed twice in business and suffered a mental breakdown before he became the greatest President America ever had. Yes, I am talking about Abraham Lincoln. His success was a result of his determination and resilience to give his vision a reality.
Secondly, it is one who does not fear the uncertain, always have higher chances of attaining the success he dreams of. For instance, the biggest risk-takers of our generation, Elon Musk, played Russian Roulette between financing both his failing companies, Tesla and SpaceEx. He was highly criticized by media and general mass, but both the companies ended up making a satisfactory profit. This man never took a step back no matter what hurdles came his way.
Last but not least, success comes with a cost. One needs to give the best of their time and abilities to see their dreams turn into reality. Which means it becomes hard for them to come back home and start organizing their stuff instead of just calling it a day. Let's take the example of one of the most successful pop singers of our generation, Beyonce Knowles. She admits of being quite messy and always tends to relax whenever she's back home rather than choosing to clean and organise her belongings.
To conclude, there is no way to fathom whether a person who keeps his room clean and organized would also possess the willingness to take risks or to be patient and determined and many more skills as such. Also, a handful of people keep their rooms very neat and clean because they suffer from Obsessive-Compulsive Disorder. Such people tend to arrange objects in their room in a specific order and this has to do nothing with obtaining success in life.
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also, but, hence, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, talking about, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8727735369 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63993408745 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628498727735 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.39902417 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1904761905 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04761904762 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329273848123 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081082352208 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720519668745 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166135818659 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896972874966 0.0645574589148 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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