A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think that person would like and dislike about living in your town or city. Why? Use specific reasons and details
If a friend of mine plans to came my city, he will see some of advantages of living in a big city. Whereas some people believe that the life in a big city increases the level of stress, I consider that the young people like urban cities because of acitivities and transportation.
First of all, People like big cities because there are lot of social acitivities in the big cities. I live in istanbul in Turkey. I am engineering student and My department is so hard. Sometimes, especially exams time, it can be stressful. When I need to stress out, I can go to a mall, buy something: therefore, living in help to recharge myself. Furthermore, I usually go to the gym. There are advanced equipments in there.
Secondly, in addition to the importance of social activities, public transportations are available until midnight. My house is a little bit far away the heart of city. When I need to go to there, I use metro until midnight. Moreover, another transportations such as taxi, buses are also at good condition.
Lastly, big cities offers better job opportunities than small towns. One can find a job which offers decent salaries. I work as an intern student while I study at my university. I believe that after graduation I may work there as a full time worrker.
To sum up, taking all aforementioned reasons into the account, one cannot reject the advantage of living in big cities. It is amazing live in the urban.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the advantages') or simply say ''some advantages''.
Suggestion: some of the advantages; some advantages
...mine plans to came my city, he will see some of advantages of living in a big city. Whereas some p...
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Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rtment is so hard. Sometimes, especially exams time, it can be stressful. When I ...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...available until midnight. My house is a little bit far away the heart of city. When I need...
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Line 7, column 233, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... after graduation I may work there as a full time worrker. To sum up, taking all afore...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, lastly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, while, in addition, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1977.66487455 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 251.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70517928287 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93605766229 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589641434263 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.082150323 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.1578947368 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2105263158 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73684210526 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0835616991896 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0241003208956 0.076458572812 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359816601026 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0470962852675 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325245972876 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.15 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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