Pets should be treated like family members.

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Pets should be treated like family members.

pets are the animal exploited and domesticated for human use. When human understood the use of wild animals they started domesticating them.Some think pets as slaves and we can use them for our entertainment purpose. According to me this is biggest misconception. pets can be treated as family. While evaluating above subject two different perspective emerges. one perspective affirmates with the first school of thought and another cogently denies its presence. Personally I have proclivity towards the thoughts that every animal has right to live with freedom and if we taking this from pets then we are responsible for their good or bad life.

It is our responsibility to give them family life. pets usually behave humanly after spending time with us. there are incidences that pets acts like family members and completes their duties of being one. Before few days a news came up where dog saved a 2 year old child from snake bite by fighting with him. if pets can prove worthy of being treated as family then we should treat them as one of us. pets are usually capable of loving back to us. Some people feel closer to their pets instead of other family membors. they can not talk but can convey their feelings through behavior

every species on earth lives in either herds or alone. Most of the them live with family. pets like dogs and cats are tamed as alone not as family so we should take care of their feelings and we should behave with them with our kind nature. By taming them we take their freedoms away, furthermore many beautiful birds belongs to forest we lock them in cage. there are few reports that birds feel upset in cage the live shorter than their natural habitat.

Although we can not behave like family with pets like snakes because they will never change their natural tendency of biting. so we should not try to treat them as family. if u do so then chances of your survival might decrease. Except such few harmful pets all other can be treated as family. Large number of pets are not only harmless but also loyal.

after this holistic analysis we can clearly see that the thoughts are in favor of second thought. pets must be treated as family members. Everyone has right to life to the fullest and happily.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72335025381 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32406526208 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545685279188 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3443522265 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.9259259259 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5925925926 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14814814815 5.45110844103 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356675190349 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114906769194 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153782938974 0.0737576698707 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22769637073 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100728990179 0.0645574589148 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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