Pets should be treated like family members
Pets were the best friends of humans for a long time. They are lovable, loyal, and innocent creatures who love you back infinitely, and without any expectations. Pets are always helpful for humans, and other animals too. Hence,
I strongly agree that pets should be treated like family members for the following three reasons. Critics may maintain that pets sometimes create a haphazard for humans but their love and adorable cuteness always melts one's heart.
Firstly, Pets are always helpful and trustworthy animals who also care, and love back. I would like to share one of my experiences that my elder cousin brother bought a dog at the age of ten. After his parents leave for work
his dog name Bruno use to guard him all day long. The whole day Bruno and my brother used to play together, eat together and enjoy their day.
Secondly, pets are so innocent that one's anger just gets vaporized in a second after watching their pet even after a rough day. Pets get involved in one family like a family member that they start to understand the emotions, and
environment of the house, behavior of people. My aunt who stays in Newyork city bought a dog after her first job. She succeeded in her job and achieved a higher position. But, after promotion, she used to work overtime and for extra
responsibilities. Her days getting harder and harder but she told me that as soon as she reaches home she completely forgot her rough day because of her dog. hence, pets always become your friend and fill joy and happiness.
Moreover, pets are loyal and never cheat for anything and if they get so much involved in a family why should not treat them as family members.
In totality, pets are more than a friend and are like loved ones. Their company always joyful and filled with happiness for anyone. Therefore, pets should be treated like family members in anyhow conditions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73780487805 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3652878378 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4391195668 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.53405017921 198% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361011006365 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124890563173 0.076458572812 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.197720322105 0.0737576698707 268% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176586242986 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.172829638779 0.0645574589148 268% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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