A large number of people has a pet nowadays. There are many reasons to have a pet, it can be a company for an lonely person, it can be helpful on the education of kids and it also brings joy for the entire family. Having a pet brings a lot of benefits, then, it is fair that pets should be treated like a family member.
It is increasing the number of people who decides to have a pet. One reason for that event is because in the modern world where we are living in, profissional life is considered as a big priority and many people feel loneliness, since they do not have time to spend with relationship construction and maintenance. Having a pet can be a good alternative for it. Animals are normally capable to interact with human, they can express emotions and even feel the human`s emotion and react to it. Who not would smile by seeing the excitement of a dog as soon as the owner gets home after a big day of work?
Some people decide to have a pet instead of children. A lot of requirement is needed before to have a child, that replacing it by a pet can be a good deal. It is not everyone who dreams of getting marriage and having kids, there are people who prefers to be on their own for their entire life. So, this person could get a pet as company without needing a patterner for it. In addition, raising a child is very expansive, there are a lot of investment within education, food, clothes, heath care, etc. In another hand, the pets do not give all these expenses since they stay home during a big part of the day, they do not need to be dressed and their food and the vet are much less costly.
Lastly, many parents support the idea of giving a pet to their child because it brings joy to the family and also increases child`s sense of responsibility and care. For example, I dreamed of having a dog but my parents were not big fans of pets because they thought it would give them a lot of work to do. So, we made a deal: I would be responsible for the tasks such as cleaning the pee and stool, giving it shower and nourishing it. Having a dog in my infancy helped me to develop the sense to responsibility and care, whose were extended to others parameters of life than just the relationship with the pet.
Overall having a pet brings company and joy to humans and helps us to be a better person. Then, it is fair that we pay off all these benefits by treating the pets as well as we treat family`s member, after all, pets are already considered as family for many people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
A large number of people has a pet nowadays. There are ma...
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Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... to have a pet, it can be a company for an lonely person, it can be helpful on the...
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Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun requirement seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of requirements'.
Suggestion: A lot of requirements
...cide to have a pet instead of children. A lot of requirement is needed before to have a child, that ...
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Line 5, column 690, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... food and the vet are much less costly. Lastly, many parents support the idea of...
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Line 7, column 416, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'showers'?
Suggestion: showers
...s cleaning the pee and stool, giving it shower and nourishing it. Having a dog in my i...
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Line 9, column 272, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y considered as family for many people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, so, then, well, after all, for example, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2046.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 475.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30736842105 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49526177022 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467368421053 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 663.3 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5664103777 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.3 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271254823971 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970234731614 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112915353954 0.0737576698707 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189819612034 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120955782429 0.0645574589148 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.